All Comments on 'Who was The Photographer? Ch. 03'

I was expecting yet another bro-sis photoshoot, ho hum.

But, this story is cleverly rendered differently, with a twist in the photoshoot.

I couldn’t stop reading. And such beautiful language. Saula, you’re so talented.

Wowww ... what a great story ... MORE than 5 stars ... So sensual, erotic, slow and with words very well picked. Please go on. Can't wait for more of your stories to come ...Thanks for sharing ...

I love the innovation applied to the incest photoshoot theme.

One of the most beautifully written erotic stories I’ve read on this site.

The sis character’s climax:

“She sees a rising cloud of butterflies of every hue. She sees their spread of wings as they bask in the sun. All her butterflies line up and take flight with excitement. She emerges from a dark tunnel and finds herself in the middle of a carnival.”

And I just love the English wit.

The bro character’s climax:

“Julia encourages, “Keep going. Push up on me and sweat. Don’t stop until the angels sing.”

An eruption of sexual self. One more spurt. His last. He is in an extravagant mood. One more. All spent now”

Inventive, witty, funny, erotic, literary - ticks all my boxes.

Deserving of more than 5 stars!

You are so talented.

The photo subject is one I want to add to my stories of StepDad and daughter.

Click, Click,

Ed

Love this story. Hope u carry on with it ideas... brother teases sister in public or front of husband, under the table tease maybe or more people with same fetish and photography, cinema settings 0)

What a story. Woman on man . . . . Sure does make the mind wonder. I never had a sister. Makes me wish I had. HaHa.

This also reminds me of when I was a kid and swimming w/ my next door neighbors: the older brother would (4 yrs older) would have him and I wear swimming goggles and then pull down is sisters bikini bottoms (she was my age). Her and I weren't even teens. She's a hottie now from what I've seen.

A brilliantly written story , obviously true and not fabricated. How could you fabricate events so close to the heart without some real practice . One would need to be close to each other, brother and sister, to experience such a beautiful happening, its not lust but loving. Thanks for the story.

Furriex.

What a story! Saula, you are soooo incredibly talented!

An amazing erotic storey, I’ve said it all in my previous comments, you are a gifted writer obviously writing some of your own experiences, I so wish I had experienced my sister like this. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I am reintroducing myself to Saula's stories one by one and this is among her very best. In her typically beautiful fashion, each character (in this case Jude and Julia) is fully developed and the subject matter both sensual and hot. 5 stars! I hope we see new stories soon as Saula. To me, she is on a very short list of near perfect authors on this site.

Saula,

I really enjoyed the premise of this story; the tension of siblings of a certain age letting it all hang out in a magic setting. Clearly, you have a thing for photoshoots, and this premise, that allows for detailed examination of the human body in different states of arousal is a good one. I appreciate the trick of having her shoot him. I began to be a little disappointed because this is a good premise for visiting her (and his) rising arousal, both as she shoots and as she is posed. The scenario lends itself to coaxing some bold masturbation. I guess most folks who read an incest story are in 'when are they going to fuck?' mode. I would be happy in this story if they never got to 'the old in-out' but instead, used the camera to capture unbridled personal moments. But maybe that's just me. And maybe you explore that in another story. Really nice originality. LK