by pinkysurprise
Interesting theme, well developed. Love to read it progressing further!
This was really well written and enjoyable, thank you for writing it!
Extremely witty and well written. I would love to read a sequel
the language / writing style and wittiness about this is what made it so freaking good!! dude can we get a sequel?
Beautiful. Simple. To the point. I loved it. I’ll be reading this again tonight.
Very annoying.......I mean arousing ....... duckin spellcheck
A clever, funny and sexy story. Nicely paced and sets itself up for a second part
OMG the images in my brain really got my motor running. Oops sent to wrong number.
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