All Comments on 'Who's in My Room?'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
wow...held me in check......

enjoyed it greatly...you have ...the "touch"....

sexmatesexmateover 17 years ago
Like a mesmerizing poem!

Excellent! It read like a poem. And man it was good!

Thanks for writng!

Sexmate

Exhilarat3Exhilarat3over 16 years ago
Woah!

I loved the twist at the end! What a great story, you never fail!

AkireonAkireonover 16 years ago
Excellent, pulled me into the character...

I love the way you've kept your writers' mechanics hidden. I very much felt this one, rather than just read along. The thing with the window was so sexy, especially the cum. I love it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Wow

So very hot. The window, the confusion. Make it longer next time though.

Youngcoc98Youngcoc98over 12 years ago
Add to this

This is a great story, you shoud add to it though

GianettaGianettaabout 11 years ago
Sensorial Range

What a gift, an expansion beyond - traveling with you in an expanded sensual dimension.

Sonnyw55Sonnyw55over 4 years ago
Huh?

Where’s Chapter 2? You got my attention with story!

Angel_AzraelAngel_Azraelover 2 years ago

WTF? This was an exact copy of "Experiments in Invisibility #01". The same lines and words, and as bad as the original.

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