by MTHudson
I like it quite a lot. Nice little story line. Dominating yet loving. Only thing was at almost the end you changed Terry's name to Tamara...just once. Also a few mistakes here and there but still good. Hope to read more of your work on Non-consent as this is one fucking hard section to write. One gotta have a good grip of decent grammar and proper spelling before they embarked in this section otherwise one would be shred to pieces.
You should continue with another adventure for Jackson and Terry....maybe let Terry tie Jackson to HER bed?
itwas the best!
loved reading it
make more likes these its soo hot.
I'll give it to you, it was a hot story. But during the second part of it, you referred to the woman as "Tamara" when her name is "Terry". Could be me that's wrong (Tamara could be her full name) but if not , you might want to clear that shit up lol
The first time I read this story was on a different site where it was plagiarized and when I found that out I just had to come here to read the original story and tell you how much I loved it! It's really amazing, you did a wonderful job! :)