All Comments on 'Who's The Boss? Ch. 09'

It seemed to me like it was just so drawn out. It really made it less suspensful to draw things out so long. By the time it got to the actual "deed" I was almost bored and I love raw and hard anal sex! Very frustrating because it could have been so much better.

Thanks for the comment. Length and pace were carefully considered in the crafting of this story. The story is as much about the process of her submission as it is about the actual "claiming" that culminates the tale.

There's nothing wrong with a quick whack-off piece. This just isn't one.

~JK

So damn hot

excellent story but thought I'd mention a little error. On the first page a '49' is rolled. dice go from 1 to 6