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Natalie smiles wide. "I like that idea. We can do that! What do you say, Slut 1? Would you come and stay with us when your husband's out of town and have.a girl orgy?"
"Yes, whatever you want me to do. Just keep giving me orgasms and let me please you."
"Then it's a plan. You can help me throw all of Amy's clothes outside after a little more cuddling." The two sluts each lie next to Natalie and put an arm around her and are gently licking her nipples as the scene ends.
- COMMENTS
Atlesonabout 3 years agoi have written a few of your stories now. you have a great build up generally in your stories but then its like your stories takes off on a run. You need to stick to the stories red line or it becomes strange for the reader to follow it. you definatly has talent in your stories and great idea's. But you start writting that the office is empty beside the girl sleeping in the privat room, where did the 3rd girl come from??? and then in my opinion you have to deside who does the seduction is it Natalie or Mrs Wilson cause its very confusing. Mrs Wilson is straight and has never been with a woman yet when she Natalie mentions a girl she suddently wants her??? i suggest you read some of the great stories here about seduction and try to build it in to your stories, so the seduction makes more sence. However that is just my opinion besides what i said i think your writting does have great potential and your character discription is great, the build up good but please work on the seduction part then i think you would soon get 5 stars from all of your stories.
