All Comments on 'Why Don't Ya Do Right?'

Need to add Delores to the mix. See if she's willing to face ride a toon in order to keep Roger. Or maybe Jessica has a sister, Jennifer, who has some sibling rivalry, and decides to help Delores in her quest to get Eddie. Nice story. Five.

Now this is a nice rewrite I enjoyed reading. Honestly, the way you’ve done the sexual interactions between Jessica and Eddie went really well. The only nitpick I have is the clothe change out of the blue with Jessica. Otherwise, good job!

Hope this time I get to see a continuation, maybe a pregnant Jessica Rabbit or other sex symbols from that era. Really wish I could see what other works you’ve done, not just on Literotica.