All Comments on 'Why I loved Auntie'

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chytownchytownalmost 3 years ago

***I thought she had on a dressing gown so why would she put on a kettle? Sorry I could not resist😁 Cute read. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Short and sweet. Everything i liked is in this, older lady, stockings and garter not modern hold-ups. A bit more detail might have been good but thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

the story its self was good. keeping it short is ok. but the use of etc. etc. was disruptive to the read and annoying.

They could have been left out and it would not have change the story. Or just generalize the topic where they were used

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

to much etc

AdrianJfAdrianJfalmost 2 years ago

loved this, simple and believable

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