All Comments on 'Why Me? Ch. 14'

Again you have added more to an already extremely well written and told story. I now realize that I will be disappointed when this story reaches it's finish. Hope it's not soon. Thanks again.

Thank you...this series is so great. I don't know how long you plan to continue it, but I hope it lasts for a long while.

The more I read the more I pray w/ all my heart that she finds a way to get free, betray the whole fifthly sad cock-less BOYS & send them all to jail where they can learn about rape for themselves...

She finds a real man who will love & give her all the pleasure she could want..just once let the woman win!!!

Tracy

Reality Intrudes

So if her trainer slid into her bottom after removing the ginger, I hope he’s enjoying the pain since he’ll feel the burning, too. It’s not like he took the time to put a condom on to protect himself.

As for the scratchy hay bale on her bare skin, it’s easy to see you’ve never actually handled any hay or you’d know hay is worse than blackberry brambles. I made the mistake of wearing shorts and a tank top the first ton of hay I loaded. You can’t see the teeny slivers of hay forced into her, but each of them will be infected by morning, creating the nastiest oozing rash everywhere her body rubbed against the bale. It will take days to heal unless it’s all extracted. If you’ve ever had a sliver get infected, you know what happens if any of it remains. Now multiply that over her whole body. It was horrible!

I don't get things like this "I collapsed on the haybale, and turned to look back at Master Hawkes again". She's just orgasmed and instead of lying there exhausted and panting she manages to muster some energy from somewhere to turn and look back at her master, and for what purpose anyway? That's not realistic surely? My experience of the orgasm is that everything stops. After the orgasm you are in no mood or have the energy to do ANYTHING for a while. Mind's in a whirl, you are vulnerable after an orgasm because you are basically dead to the world for a few minutes. How come he didn't come with her bouncing about like a whore on his dick I can only imagine he has problems in that department. Anyway, still enjoying it, except for the little ass reference. I can't think of her as having a man sized ass - R