All Comments on 'Wichita Werewolf'

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26thNC26thNCabout 2 years ago

Strange, but actually interesting. Of all the men in the West to bump into, the Witchita Werewolf bumps into the Lone Ranger.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Cute story, especially the ending.

Kemosabe

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Yayyy! Hi-ho Silver awaaaay...

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xabout 2 years ago

Okay, you got an extra star for the Lone Ranger and Tonto!

MissMudMissMudabout 2 years ago

What a funny, clever story! Thanks!

Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Nowabout 2 years ago

This was new. I loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Nice twist! 5*

tralan69ertralan69erabout 2 years ago

Hi-Yo Silver away

Humor in the morning. Love it.

Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Zorro!

kelchakelchaabout 2 years ago

Frank Hamer, Texas Ranger, was the masked man. Well, actually he was the real life inspiration for the lone ranger character. One of the toughest lawmen ever. I think he was wounded around fifty times in his career. Actor Kevin Costner played his part in the movie about the death of Bonnie and Clyde a few years ago.

Your story was pretty good and a nice read.

Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Great twist

5*

jimjam69jimjam69about 2 years ago

Surprise surprise Kemo-Sabe!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

...and a hearty "HiHo. Silver..."

VERY well done !

The 'tongue-firmly-planted-in-cheek' ending snuck up on the reader, and the only better ending would have been to have that yell as the last line !

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Dumb. 1*

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

You goof. Lol!

alextasyalextasyabout 2 years ago
Suhweet!

Oh, so clever, both rare and well done. Saw it coming too late to stop it.

Thank you!

=a

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago
Well

Well, that's it, I've now read all of your stories, and they all have a common theme.

For a story to be good it has to have a beginning, a middle, and an end, not always in that order but they all have to be there.

In your case, the beginning as usually there. The middle (usually truncated) is OK(ish) but sadly I am yet to find an ending, not a one, in all of your stories has an ending that could be called adequate.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Silly and fun.

Something different...well done!

oldtwitoldtwit7 months ago

I had to give this 4 stars as I was laughing so much, good job

NVDiceGuyNVDiceGuy11 days ago

Love the ending nice parallel

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