All Comments on 'Wicked Games'

by AlessaRose

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Blackpaw29Blackpaw29over 2 years ago

Nicely built up and hot, the imagery of skin and touch is quite snesual.

AlessaRoseAlessaRoseover 2 years agoAuthor

@Blackpaw29 - Thank you so much! I hope to do better in the future. ❥︎

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This was such a titillating read. Please write more lesbian succumbus forceful seduction stories. Your writing style is well versed for those types. Please make the plot interesting and with much more feisty resistance from the victim.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

That was just incredible. You write with such precise descriptions, such passion. I came so hard reading this and imagining the scene unfolding... just. Wow

AlessaRoseAlessaRoseover 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you both so much for responding to my little tale! It's lovely and encouraging comments like these that keep me going, and I'm definitely inspired to do even better next time. (:

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Really well written, your words create clear imagery in the minds eye. love it

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I'm an aspiring writer looking to mesh two of my passions together - eroticism, and storytelling. I'm pretty new to writing erotic literature, and would appreciate any feedback. Thank you for taking the time to read my humble little works and giving me the chance to share a pi...