All Comments on 'WICKed Hormones Ch. 02'

I loved it! It was especially hot when you mentioned that she resembled Denise Melani as I googled that name and saw her pictures. That have me an awesome reference in my mind of the mother while reading the story. Five stars and a favorite point!

Just please whatever you do.. font involve the sister, the sister's husband Karen's husband.. just let the relationship between Jake and her grow until he's pounding her into the mattress daily and the headboard is destroying the wall.. maybe knock mama up??

She's doomed.

but hopefully it is just by the older sister who then joins in for a 3 some

Really enjoying the story. i had to google Denise Milani and I'm glad i did. I can see why Matthew and everyone else wants her. Keep it going.

sweet baby Jesus that was some good stuff m8 this story is going very nicely cant wait for the next chapter

Awesome u included those actress names! It made me go crazy that his mom is so hot. Please Ch 3 quicker and keep going. Mom and son every chapter more :)

My mom was wearing a short gown (no bra) as usual, and panties. I reached up under her gown and started kneading her boobs as she rode me. They felt as great as I had hoped. I watched my mom's pussy going up and down my cock, sometimes staying down and grinding her pussy on me. I started squeezing my mom's boobs and she started moaning loud. I was mesmerized watching my mother, her face becoming twisted almost looking like she was in agony, but her moaning proved different. Soon she was moaning, Oh yes, oh yes, oh god honey, yes, yes, oh honey, oh honey, oh honey," my mom began shrieking! "I'm going to cum, oh I'm cumming, ooooooooh," she shouted!! Just then my cock erupted inside my mom's tight pussy, repeatedly shooting streams of my semen into her,

I like your narrative style.

Jacob hopes that his mother will become his private MILF porn and Karen has succumbed to the uncontrollable desire to impale himself on that big cock.

By now Karen has exceeded the established limit, will she show Jacob how much a bitch his beloved mom is? He awakened a new perverse desire with him, dressing in provocative lingerie and heels or talking more dirty like a MILF porn could help his son even more!

But where will Kare's perversion stop? To try a trio and beyond?

We can't wait to read the next chapters,

good job

I think that while your overall narrative so far is good that your main character lacks at least any kind of physical development aside from his dick getting bigger it just kills any immersion for me to imagine essentially a 12 year old with a giant dick

I am thinking that perhaps the visiting sister notices the bulge in little brother's pants and is curious enough to want to touch and help....

Man you can write!!! This is one of the best I've read in years, and I've read lots and lots of stories. Do continue, you rock

A beautiful but bitchy, controlling, aunt with a rack even bigger than Karen’s, and Jacob’s new found confidence that gives him the motivation to have her dominated.

Keep writing, i am loving it!!

Please continue to write YOUR story, your way.

I love what you’re doing with this and the slow buildup to fucking the mother. Look forward to seeing if anything comes from the friends mom or the sister.

One of the best stories EVER!

LOVE it when she's struggling with her choices...

fuck you should get 10 stars you made me nut again thanks 100% HOT

The story isn't terribly original, but it's written quite well and it's exciting and hot. Obviously, Karen is a slave to her wants and desires at this point and the sister will soon be involved as well. I'm not sure how far you can go without the story feeling stale, but I look forward to reading it.

Please look up set(transitive) vs sit(intransitive) (e.g. I set down the bowl. vs I sit down.)

This story teaches you a couple of things, among them the following:

First: As a parent you may have the best intentions to shape your offsprings into honest, respectful people. The reward for all your efforts still might be that they end up being sneaky, egotistical little devils.

Second: A 40 year old mother can be more naive than your average female teenager. Karen just taking her horny son's word for it, really? Why not ask him to jerk off in front of her from time to time, to be sure he can't come from his own manipulations? The constant begging and the equally constant giving in became a bit straining.

This work, especially this chapter bears a lot of resemblance to one of rawlyrawls work, another writer here on literotica, especially that sex scene, just saying

Oh, yeah...Mom has really "crossed the line" here...AND , as somebody else observed, sister is next...

A whole week/weekend while sister & brother-in-law are there...& sister will see that 'monster's...she'll want some too...

And, later, more females to feed it...Yyyaaayyy!!!

Now, Chapter 3...

Guys I am from India and I have a list of popular actresses, names of the women, girls I know from facebook insta, known faces in any field like sports, journalism. As per their age group I have classified them. And while reading any literotica story, as per the character description, I fit an appropriate name out of my list in that story and imagine her as the main character throughout the story. Now for this story, as per the nature of the mom and her age, I have two names for now : Actresses Lorraine Bracco and Christina Hendricks. I have tried both in this story at different times and they gave me great pleasure in their own way. They are doing good for me. But I really need some other suggestions as well. Please guys can you give me some great recommendations for this story? Please please please...

I couldn't stop reading this one. Great story, well-written. Thanks

The conversation-to-action ratio is a bit high, the characters a bit talky. But mechanics are good, grammar is excellent and character development is top-notch.

The character development is strong and adding to the story. I don't mind the dialogue one bit. My only criticism is that the plot seems to be getting ahead of itself.

I know it's an important part of the story, but Karen has to be sooooooooooo gullible... stupid...

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!

Amazing start to an amazing story!

I'm sorry to say, but I agree with some of the other readers; the story sometimes gets a little 'talky' and the mom is a little too gullible, but neither gets in the way of a fun read. I enjoy that the relationship is a progression and that there are plenty of 'mom' moments. Thank you.