All Comments on 'WICKed Hormones Ch. 04'

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hair94hair94almost 4 years ago
Keeps Getting Better!!

Wow! Great chapter!! Can't wait until chapter 5.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Wow..

Finally got her first n her back.. he needs to impale his sister, and bend mom's leggs begnd her head.. mom on her back needs to be an everyday occurrence now..but spice it up..have it so mom and Jacob have to go to a hotel room or something.. make it to where either Rachel catches on to what they're doing..or have mom and Jacob get into something of an argument ,that Jacob blackmails her back into letting him cum in her or he will let dad know everything.ake a chapter, later of Jake looking at colleges and mom take him on a college tour, have to stop at hotels for each night and Jacob just pounding her incessantly

Roughsex42Roughsex42almost 4 years ago

This is my favorite story on this site. Good job!

gorden55gorden55almost 4 years ago
fucked mommy

This story is gettiing real good. Can not wait till the next chapter. I thick this is going real good Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Favorite story

I check here about daily for next chapters. So hot. Hopefully Jake cums in Mom soon and the Wicked Hormones in his sperm change her even more! Tits grow more, she cant help but desire crazy incest sex with her son and shes a nympho for only him. Cant wait!

WritingwhatIlikeWritingwhatIlikealmost 4 years ago
Keep going

Love this story, it keeps getting better and better.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Looking Good so far.....

Starting to like this story so far and looking forward to more to come

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

This is such an awesome series!

I can't wait for him to nail the sister too, then get both of them pregnant. The scene where Karen and Rachel realise they're both screwing him will be epic!

TSreaderTSreaderalmost 4 years ago
A very good addition!

Very good indeed! And very yummy too! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
I can't wait for chapter 5

This is the greatest story I have ever read. You have done a great job of slowly and inadvertently turning Karen into Jacob's slut. I hope Chapter 5 cums quickly. Please don't stop this series. it gets better and better.

Peeksy1999Peeksy1999almost 4 years ago

Great stuff. Love how he is slowly overcoming his mother’s reluctance.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Excellent!

Like the other comments, I want to see this progress. It seems that the sister wants him to touch her, but I want the mother to want him, too, so she initiates blowjobs like the sister did. Then progress to sex, and have one catch the other, and after the initial shock, join in.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Hormonal effects

Once he starts pumping his chemically altered cum into his mom, the effects on her body will accelerate even more. Karen's tits getting larger and larger, no way for her to hide their growing size. Altering her mind as well as she becomes addicted to his huge cock and potent cum. The same things eventually happening to his sister as well, transforming both of them.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Amazing!!!

Great series! I cannot wait for more hot, sweaty, loud Mom & Son fucking!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Great work

Great series. Though personally i dont like the sister's involvement in the sexual nature of things. I feel Karen and Jake have something special between them. So, the sister's involvement just seems unnecessary. Let this story just be between Karen and Jake and their journey.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Keep it going!

Great story! Loving this series! I especially love scenes were Karen tells her son no and "5 minutes later" she's getting throughly pounded by him. Please have more of those as she caves in more and more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Amazing start?!

Wow, this is one of the best I have read. The sleazy yet demure attitude of mom is insanely attractive. Can’t wait for more...

MiniwandMiniwandalmost 4 years ago

Fantastic story. Keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Fantastic work

This series is very well thought and written. Every turn is extremely hot. The way in which the conservative mother struggles [and fails] to fend of her son's and her own. Desires and the relentlessly pushy son never get old.please keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Great but...

The story is great, quite descriptive too. The only issue I find with this is that the gap between new chapters is extremely long and is getting longer :(

becker92548becker92548over 3 years ago
Soon

How soon till the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
wicked whore moans

keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Greaaaat Story

Fantastic story. Keep writing and more please. Soon.

Eagerly awaiting next one. Just like Rawlyrawls....

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
THe time between chapters is getting much longer

Like the title says, the time is getting much longer between chapters. I mean its like almost 2 months!

gorden55gorden55over 3 years ago

This is getting really good. But I would like to read about more sex with more people in it. The more thing I wood like to see is for Jacob to get more forceful with all the women perhapes you could use the hormones making him more forceful. This is one of the best stories so no mater what you do keep it coming. Thank you

Moon_and_StarsMoon_and_Starsover 3 years ago

You're doing a great job! Keep it going.

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57about 3 years ago

So fucking hot! Five stars and a favorite point!

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57about 3 years ago

Loving it! Can't wait to read the next chapter! Five stars and a favorite point!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

If she isn’t gonna allow him to cum inside her, wished that Jacob had shot his big load ON his mom’s pussy, blasting it all over her ravaged vaginal lips and claiming his territory on her body. He tells her to hold herself open just as he’s about to unload. Once done, some of his jizz landing on her exposed cunt could sexily leak inside her on accident, risking pregnancy and causing Karen to uncontrollably frig Jacob’s cum into herself, the naughty thought of her sons sperm defiling the forbidden confines of her pussy getting her off for a 4th time.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago
Good, but...

I just binged the first four installments. They are good as episodes but if you are reading successive 'chapters' as in a book, the stock phasing gets repetitive. You have developed your characters to an extent but I find some things inconsistent. You have Rachel reacting to smell/pheromone/hormone but not so much with Karen. Jake seems to regard Rachel and her marriage much more than he does his parents that he supposedly loves. Is he pretending to care about his sister? Not as currently written. Was he always a petty, spoiled, self-centered ass or have the hormones changed him? He actively tries to embarrass Karen in front of his cucked father. He seems to have no concern or conscience. This character is not interesting to me at all.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

OMG 10 stars thanks you made me cum like 3 times with that one 100% HOT

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

To think - mom could have bought the kid a fleshlight and told him to watch porn...

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago
Boring

Each chapter is repetitive.

You says he looks like 12. He sounds 12.

Hinting to his Dad, trying to shop his Mom in to him.

jcus0511jcus0511over 2 years ago

Fabulous story building really well.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story. Love how things are progressing. More naked fun with mom would be appreciated.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

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ExperienceCountsExperienceCountsalmost 2 years ago

This is just an outstanding series. So well-written, such great pacing, and so d*&n hot!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I love jacking off to this story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

A penis that big would be extremly painfull and not at all pleasant.So please i know its total fantasy ,but this comes under mother /son not magic

blackknight314blackknight3148 months ago

Good job, thanks for sharing your work.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

i really hope nothing goes on with the mom and grandpa

PixxiePixxie15 days ago

Another great chapter. Karen still maintains her motherliness while descending further into depravity. The intercourse is frequent enough to be hot, but enough of a journey to make it feel like a special treat. Well done.

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Update 03/19/2024.... Hi everyone. Just wanted to alert you all that I have submitted chapter 15 for publishing. I've read several comments and I understand the frustration of the length of time between submissions. Believe me though... no one is more frustrated than me. ...

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