All Comments on 'WICKed Hormones Ch. 09'

Needs more Karen+Jake creampies!

dude ditch the rubber already...Jake needs to rawdog his Mom more often

I sure hope it doesn’t take over 2 months again for the next chapter 😑

A worthy next chapter. Keep it going.

5*****

Very good Story!!!

Love your slow burn style and steady buildup of your story (and Karen’s steady breakdown of her inhibitions). Keep up the great writing & polishing your craft! Here’s to Ch. 10 arriving sooner 🍻

PS: have Karen mention it’s dangerous or unsafe time of the month in the next chapter, but still she gives in to sex with Jacob...but then the condom breaks 😈

Super hot! I hope tapping into something new with hair pulling and spanking is a foreshadowing for bringing the inner slut out of Karen.

Have been waiting for chapter 9. It's finally here and what a great story it is. Loved every bit. Can't wait for next chapter.

RTR you put Karen's sister in thigh high nude stockings..Karen Rachel and DA Turner need to be in nylons with Jacob when he's fucking them.. don't take them off their legs.. nylons ON a woman when having sex is so erotic.. Plus I want The ladies on their backs more when Jake is plowing them.. I'd like to see Jake cumming in them, especially his mom, with her legs up.. just do that.. I'll be happy.. have you also thought of Jacob visiting Rachel's home, secretly, and fucking her in her own home?? That's be awesome

Story is still going strong, but I would leave Mrs. Miller out of it. You have several subplots to mine without further diluting the story by constantly introducing women for him to have. I'd also like to see some "moral" consciousness leak into this tale. With all the family sex, someone is going to find out. If he gets Sara, does he keep doing it with his Mom, the lawyer, anyone? Does he hate his father (we know he doesn't) so much to cuck him? 5*

You put out yet another fantastic chapter! I like how Karen keeps getting more and more risky as she experiences more and more pleasure! I also like the new addition! Way to tie in the new character!

Loved the new chapter. Keep up the good work!

Need jake to milk her and her belly to swell. Did the milk just get introduced? Is it from the hormones? Maybe hormones make her tits grow and lactate more!

worth the wait. 5 stars!

condoms break all the time. they just don't make them like they used to.

Great chapter. I will say with the five women that you are planning to give Jacob there no need to add anymore. I encouraged you to focus on the development with core women which seemed to be mom, aunt and sister. Jacob girlfriend is more of a side, but necessary to keep up appearances and lawyer is more of a fun thing. The next chapter seems to be the college tour which is another good opportunity to break down Karen inhibitions more with unprotected sex, video taping and even anal under notion it will prevent un wanted pregnancy. My one cristism of this chapter seem to be Jacob non chalant attitude about being caught by his dad. The consequences of their actions would destroy the whole family. Jacob seems to be too reckless and it seems out of character.

Read the previous several chapters....Karen has been expressing milk for some time now. This new chapter further explains its prob cos her estrogen levels are thru the roof (and why she’s quit taking birth control). Hints like these (in addition to the sister, Rachel, also quitting BC pills since she’s trying for a baby) seem to imply incest impregnation(s) are on the way...

Love the story so far. I was actually hoping they would get caught by dad. One other thing, This could have been two chapters. eight pages is a bit of a read.

Great chapter! It’s pleasure to see how you develop the story so far.

Wished the condom had busted in the last sex scene with Karen and Jacob...was hoping Karen would look down and see another huge load of her son’s cum oozing down her leg, while her clueless husband slaved away in the backyard!

I suppose you are building up Karen’s overconfidence and trust in the condoms to where she allows Jacob to finish inside her more with them on...until the inevitable malfunction 😈

Now the Aunt?!? I get that she was mentioned in earlier chapters, but to now have Jacob juggle FOUR women is a bit much...unless you plan to turn this to a full-blown incest saga. Could’ve done without (or at least less of) Aunt Brenda’s adulterous backstory which I mainly skimmed thru. I acknowledge that it establishes Karen and Brenda’s secret agreement, but felt it kinda dragged had me anticipate a return to Mom+son action. At least you’re keeping Karen and Jacob as the focus and drive of the story (and having them have a couple fuck sessions each chapter is a good policy to continue). I know the date with Sara Miller will prob be in the next chap...just advise that it doesn’t take up too many pages

The kinky yoga pants sex was a missed opportunity, but at least you mentioned it at first...just wished you’d have kept Karen wearing them and had her bent over at the side of Jacob’s bed, telling her son to take her from behind. I suppose you didn’t want her to accept right away she’s come to love doggy-style—the second kitchen-fuck scene at least made up for it! Have Karen push back at Jacob next time they are doing it in that position (maybe Jacob realizes at that very moment the condom has broken, but his Mom in the throes of throwing herself back at him pushes him over the edge to unleash inside her...) Agree there should be an instance where Karen mentions she is ovulating but despite it being a dangerous time of the month, throws caution to the wind and let’s her son fuck her.

Bust a nut inside Mom.

The dialog during the Karen-Jacob scenes is getting better, especially as they cum together. Next progression is to have Karen encourage more vocally for Jacob to ejactulate in her (“Do it!”) while Jacob does the same, expressing he is shooting his stuff in his Mom. Their trust in the condoms leads to more hot fucks, but of course a time will come (cum) when one breaks, or Jake doesn’t have one on hand, or they run out and it’s too far to drive to Macon. Describe Jacob having his mouth at his Mom’s ear next time, whispering innuendo and naughty things like he’s hammering her hot pussy or about to cum inside her

When is the next chapter? It's a pleasure to see a new chapter but it means I have to wait for the next one.

This story is amazing. You really developed the characters and the plot very well. And the sex scene are scorching hot, few authors have your talent in this area. I really hope you'll continue writing for years to come because you're a genius.

I can't wait for Jake's date with Sarah. I'm hoping for a threesome with her mother Donna.

Discarded condom. You didn’t mention what happened to the condom full of cum after Jacob blew his wad inside of it in his Mom. Big uh-oh if he somehow is careless in leaving it near the kitchen sink and it gets discovered by dad...

If mom is expressing milk from the hormones, and the the son drank it couldn't cause him to start to physically grow? Just a thought.

No damn way you're new at this. Writing style and imagery are top notch. Even after 9 chapters the pace still feels perfect. Only thing I wanted to read were the two sisters on their knees discussing how to "help". As Jacob would say....you're doing AWESOME.

I personally dont really care for the new characters, how much pussy does the boy need? Karen is the star of the story and should always be the main focus of the stor.y. Other characters i could careless about.

Awesome! Loved it!

Great chapter! I was afraid we had seen the last of this wonderful series.

Great so far, cant wait for next chapter

I agree with the others. The pacing is surprisingly perfect even so late into the series. Please dont keep adding women to the story, it just dilutes the intimacy between the main characters and it then becomes a less engaging story and similar to what other writers have done when their series stretches too long and they run out of ideas. It shows a lack of imagination because quantity doesnt matter, quality does. I really like that you stepped it up with the dangerous situations of getting caught. Its not unique by any stretch but it was still a very well written scene. I hope you can surprise us with more risky encounters under the dad’s radar and maybe even getting caught but brazenly playing it off somehow through gaslighting the dad. Overall, great series, hope you update soon, you have a talent for this.

“ If mom is expressing milk from the hormones, and the the son drank it couldn't cause him to start to physically grow? Just a thought.”

Agree this should be developed further. Jacob needs to start filling out his skinny, 12yo body

Groundhog Day! Same thing, same players, different day. When does Karen go down on the DA? When does the DA eat some fresh creampie out of Rachel or Karen? Let’s mix it up a little bit...too many combinations being ignored......

good as always.i like the slow burn and reluctance that karen has. please continue your graet story.5***** i wish there were more stars

it cant be better .i am waiting for the next chapter.also i hava a suggestion please do not add females to the story anymore and focus on jacob and his mother.

Jacob should start sensing when women are fertile & ovulating (another side effect of the hormone) kinda like a reverse of what his Mom and others smell whenever they’re around him. Next time when Karen enters that time of the month, and she and her son are around each other, the urge for them to fuck should be unbearable and they slip up by throwing caution to the wind & doing it raw...Just as he’s about to cum, Jacob attempts to pull out in a brief return to sanity, but surprisingly it is Karen who slams herself back at her son at that moment—Jacob’s potent sperm blasts from his cock and floods Karen’s fertile womb, where her eggs must surely be waiting...

Great story. Keep them coming.

all of the stories were great.....waiting for 10

Fantastic chapter indeed. Well worth the wait. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the amazing work. ^__^

Karen and Jacob need to start letting loose more when they cum together. Especially Karen, have her start saying wickedly naughty things to coax the sperm out of her son. They both need to grow out of their tame, clinical terms and start getting nasty...I like that Jacob is pushing it with his Mom (in more ways than one)

"cock of the house"

magic! Jacob shouldn't try put dad down directly. Let Karen's hormones/needs do the work. He should just concentrate on extracting naughty admissions in the throws of her impending orgasm. Get Karen to tell him how wonderful his cock is. How much she enjoys cuming on it. Admit more vocally when she is cuming on it.... etc.

It essentially doesn't read like a story where Jacob wants to cuckold his dad. He loves his dad. He wants his mom to do the cuckolding.

More bareback with Mom, keep her full

Alright, we get it. All the women are married and they feel guilty about "Cheating" on thire Husbands. I find the whole sparkling and looking at the damn wedding ring distracting.

Maybe one day the dad will be out of town overnight and the Jacob was able to convince his mom to shower together.

Mentioning from time to time about the sparkling wedding rings on the married fingers of Jacob's mother, sister and Aunt's sure added to the wickedly, thrilling immoral acts of incest. That's Excellent.

Hopefully Karen and Rachel will find out that they both helping Jacob. Then eventually both mother and daughter joined forces to help Jacob.

Very entertaining story so far. I do agree with some of the other ingrates here in the comments section about a conflict arising with more women being introduced. Namely that Karen's flimsy excuse for needing to take care of Jacob will become more irrelevant if she allows him to have pre-marital sex with more partners around the clock. Personally I'm all for it, but I think that development should be coupled with Jacob starting to feel bad for cucking his dad/cheating on his girlfriend and slight loss of interest in his mom while he branches out. Also, now that it's been established that she is addicted to the new cock of the house she should have to start fighting for his attention by crossing more boundaries. So far a lot of the pretense the characters have is to soothe their consciences and to add kink. Perhaps Jacob could be reluctant while Karen begs for him to drain her bloated tits with his girlfriend in the house? Anyway, keep up the good work and take your time.

Its been fun watching the character development of the uptight mother slowly starting to get a bit slutier. Cant wait for more chapters. 5 stars keep up the great work

Ch. 10 should pick up right where you left in the kitchen, you gotta explain what happened to the used condom since that’s a big oversight at the end of chapter 9.

Date night with Sara should just be briefly covered, as it’s just their 1st date and I doubt a church-goer girl like her gives up any first time

So that leaves these threads to tackle:

DA Ms. Turner comes back with exposition from sleazy doctor; talk with Karen

College campus tour(s) planning or going to at least one of the campuses

Results from lab at Aunt Brenda’s clinic; perhaps Jake pay his Aunt another visit when neither Karen, Ms. Turner or Rachel are available to relieve him...Sara isn’t there yet and he doesn’t wanna “blow” it with her

Hopefully another Jake and Rachel scene...anal now on the table if she’s adamant about not risking her brother knocking her up

Add to these the usual 1-2 encounters between Karen and Jacob (shower scene?), maybe have them slip up and he cums inside her without a condom again so Karen has to get plan B from Aunt Brenda on the down low...

Looking forward to Ch. 10 coming soon!

Almost everything is already said ... Keep up your great work ... more chapters, please ...

Wonderful work! Cant wait for the next one!

Why are you not involving kiss please involve it too

Ch. 10 beginning idea...

It opens with Jacob in his shower, reliving the incredible hot fuck he just had with his Mom in the kitchen as he soaps and strokes his big cock. Suddenly, his shower curtain slips open—there to his amazement is Karen, wrapped in a towel! “Your dad’s gone to the hardware store...” she says matter-of-factly. No other words are necessary as Karen’s dainty towel falls to the floor. The horny Mother and son take one look in each other’s eyes and the unspoken signal for forbidden sex soon has them jump into each other’s arms, kissing passionately. Karen, (who was careful to lock the door) braces herself against the tile walls of her son’s shower facing Jacob, while her son reaches down between them and aims his bare cock once again on her inflamed vagina. This time there’s barely any fumbling or teasing as both son and Mom are desperate to couple once more and fornicate. “We need to be quick, Jake—your father said he’d be back in less than an hour...and be careful when you shoot it out. Mommy is ovulating today...” Jacob groans as he feels a wicked squeeze on his throbbing cock from his Mom’s sweet pussy. “Okay, Mom...” he moans, holding her leg up as the warm water showers over their naughty union. They lean in for a kiss, tongues wrestling. Karen’s ample breasts press against her son’s chest as he pins her harder against the tiling with each penetrating stroke. Their gasping breaths increase in tempo, matched by the pace of their fervid fucking. Jacob brings his mouth to Karen’s ear, his cock now pulsing up inside her clutching pussy to the hilt. He was getting close. “I wanna...impregnate...you Mommmm....I want to....put a....babyyy inside youuuuuuu....” he rasps in her ear. Karen’s moans grow louder and her vaginal walls clamp tighter on her son’s pistoning phallus with each naughty word that he had just uttered. “UNNNNNNNNGH!!!!!” she mewls as the most powerful orgasm yet rocks her body. Her son’s words shock her, but as she faces him to scold him for the wicked implications of what he’s suggesting...her mouth opens and she looks her son straight in the eye, but the only words that come out are: “DO IT.”

The kissing is a great idea for Karen to loose even more control whilst "helping" her son. The idea being Jacob manipulating her into showing him how its done because he doesn't want to blow it with Sara. A lie of course. Smothering her with a kiss. Smothering her resistance for him to cum inside her.

The pheromones/scent. I love it when you work it into the story. Makes one almost believe they are good girls but its their hormones that are deciding how to help "poor" Jacob out.

Legs up, nylons at their hips, women on their backs.. hotel rooms, college visits.. jacob pounds Rachel and Melissa once and mom twice.. but dad can't Jacob to the college trips, and have Jacob visit Rachel's house once and they fuck in her marital he'd..

Anyone else find this guy, completely love his story, power through all 9 chapters, and then find out he only posts like once every 2-3 months? You’re killing me RTR, but if that’s what you need to make the story as good as it is, then absolutely take the time you need. Thanks for the awesome story and can’t wait for more.

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

IMPREGNATE MOM❗️

Jacob needs to pound Karen’s pussy RAW again (and again), keep her pumped full of his cum, and knock her up...

😈🤰🏻🔘•〰️•〰️•〰️🍆🚶🏻‍♂️

Karen should somehow find herself giving Jacob commands while he claims more women. That was hot! Perhaps he could nail the pastor's wife (and/or daughter) during mass down the road? Also it might help if Jacob's pheromones had some effect on men like drowsiness or something to get them out of the way. I like the idea of his mates' breast milk progressing his condition making it harder to hide. Another commenter had a good idea of him being able smell his women's ovulating pussies that could develop.

you are straching story too long. Now its loosing intrest.

Love the story. Really good work.

I would love to read karen surrendering to jake, admiting he is better than his father or something like that, him making her say it. Then later asking for it.

Please get Karen pregnant after a few women

Lab results: Aunt Brenda’s lab results come back & they reveal the powerful WickTropin hormones have re-engineered Jacob’s sperm to both raise estrogen levels in any female partners (even more so if the woman’s DNA is close to his) as well as defeat any form of birth control and plan B contraceptive. At the same time, information Karen had got from assistant DA Ms. Turner confirms this revelation (obtained from Dr. Grant). Too late, Karen only finds out about these new developments just before she rushes to visit Aunt Brenda to get a plan B and take up her offer on trying out her new birth control pills—mere hours before, Jacob, (either with her consent this time...or due to busted condom) had cum inside her again, and at the worst time of the month. The dreaded implications of all these disclosures confronts Karen as she squirms in her sister’s exam room chair, still feeling her son’s load of semen inside her. Karen processes the sobering news as she meekly leaves her sister’s clinic empty-handed . Having only told Brenda the plan B and BC pill were for “just in case”, they are now worthless. Brenda watches her get up and leave, not having been told her nephew’s potent sperm was at that moment already once again inside his Mom, swarming around in Karen’s fertile womb and poised to do irreparable damage...

“Perhaps he could nail the pastor's wife (and/or daughter) during mass down the road?” They are Southern Baptists NOT Roman Catholic, lmfao! 🙄

Twins for Karen and Rachel. I still want this outcome, especially since both Jacob’s Mom and sister have had a load of his cum inside them (albeit both times they “dodged the bullet” and didn’t get knocked up). From hints in the story, it seems to be established that: exposure to Jacob’s hormone-enhanced sperm causes heightened awareness to his scent, increased breast size, lactation and estrogen “levels through the roof”. Only his Mom and sister seem to be heavily/rapidly affected, so close DNA-relation also seems to be a factor—Ms. Turner isn’t showing the signs as fast and Aunt Brenda has only just been exposed. Next symptom of exposure to Jake’s cum should be that women become super-fertile and even ovulate more than one egg...unbeknownst to either Karen and Rachel, should Jacob ever cum inside them raw again (which he WILL) he’s gonna in all likelihood knock them up with TWINS. The result: Jacob and Rachel have twin boys since they grow to love doing it doggie-style all the time and that position seems to encourage more male sperm breeding sons. Karen and Jacob conceive twin girls when he finally gets his Mom on her back, her stockinged legs up in the air. Karen can’t stop her son as he rips through a busted condom & drops the biggest load yet inside her—his eager sperm fertilizing both her eggs. The whole Mitchell Incest Saga should have an epilogue where the two sets of handsome and gorgeous twins—“nephews” and “Aunts” to each other—have just turned 18...😈😈😈😈

Continue Karen and Jacob’s wickedly dangerous liaisons...have them fuck on Sunday in the basement church nursery again. Jacob flips Karen onto her back on the couch and breaks the condom in fucking her so hard. Karen has to sit back in the pews filled with her son’s spunk!

Give us an update on Ch. 10 on June 2, don’t make us wait till July 2

Please include facefucking and deepthroat as a way of Jake releasing his frustration and anger over some issue in school.

Not sure who's dumber: Jake, who can't keep his big mouth shut or all these married women who seem to forget they're married until the sun glints off of their wedding bands

How chapter 10 coming along?

Hope Chapter 10 is here soon. Imagining Karen back at the family table, whilst hosting the whole family again she is reminiscing how much fun she has had with Jacob. A lot less guilt than the previous meal.

Looking forward to her helping in more seductive outfits. Maybe talking to her husband on the phone whilst Jacob is inside her. Or even better, talking to her husband through the bathroom locked door as she has another "relieving headache" bath with Jacob inside her.

End of the day happy with whatever you write. Please update us?

Excellent story. Keep up the great writing.

Don't let the anonymous negative comments influence you. If they don't have the tits or balls to put their name on it, then F them.

thanks for the update

Any insight into dimensions of his cock and his mother’s tits especially given her own growth spurt? And how scrawny he is to give us a better idea as to how “freakish” this kid actually is. Looking forward to the next chapter. Hoping for a threesome with him, his mother and lawyer or sister

Yes! Chapter 10 cumming up….🍿

We need follow up on the Melissa crush. I get that Jake has a big thing. I’m wanting some mom and Melissa closure. Even if it a three way, fine, whatever. Those two need to close the door and get involved.

This series is amazing. I am very happy you have continued it. Each chapter is long and expertly written, and there are so many chapters. Thanks for writing this!

This was a brilliantly written story but a little disappointing it could have been more erotic.

Wow, an incredible addition to this story. Thank you!

How can you have sex without any kissing? not on the cheek or on top of the head like these

characters.

Awesome writing, it was funny and lighthearted.

Ooookkkkaaaayyyy....and the story expands in the mom's acceptance of her relationship with Jake...and finds out she has a kinky side herself...

Good On You...for writing this...the plot has developed, again, and continues to "thicken"....

On to Chapter 10, and "The Date" with Sara, the pastor's daughter...😈😰

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1. Lorraine Bracco,

2. Christina Hendricks and

3. Diana Lane.

I have tried all three in this story at different times and they gave me great pleasure in their own way. They are doing good for me. But I really need some other suggestions as well. Please guys can you give me some great recommendations for this story? Please please please...

What a fabulous series. Think it ranks as my all-time favorite.

More Text... PLEASE..!!

The series going was great but the AUTHOR has to add a cheating wife. And also the same old excuse of being drunk and all. Sigh! I hate cheating spouses. I wonder does every women in U.S.A. are cheating whores ?

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!

At this point Jake has become a dick and needs his cut off