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by dorry123
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Anonymousover 3 years agoSloppy writing!
Several stupid mistakes with pronouns! Who was "Her Mother"?? Get yourself a proofreader next time.
Anonymousover 3 years agoHer = his ?
Thought the story idea wasn’t too bad, but who or maybe what checked the grammar?
Anonymousover 3 years agoDecent Idea
Like the idea and the effort but you really need someone to read over the story. I hope English is not your first language.
homerjayover 3 years agopromising.
yes it needs some editing but I like the story and premise. Please keep going.
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