by Alladinzane
Thought it was very hot. Yes, we’ve all encountered the bitchy friend and would love to have her in this spot.
Pretty hot sex but the lead in and closure were a little abrupt for 5*. I need more of the marital dynamics, what was Holly and Anna's "real" history, things like that. 4*
The writing leaves much to be desired. That said, I have a bitchy friend, and I'll never look at her the same again.
kissmygrits Based on this comment, you may BE the bitchy friend ;)
Loved it.. although, I wish she would have moved in with them permanently, staying even after he “break”, and could read about him knocking her up, along with his wife. You mentioned a surprised look on her face the first time he came inside her. I was hoping that might have been where you were going…. She wasn’t using any birth control, and he just filled her unprotected womb with his cum. I’d love an alt version of the story exploring their threesome becoming permanent, and her and then his wife becoming pregnant.
Makes you wonder if all those bitchy types are really just submissives at heart, crying out for a strong dom to give them what they truly need. Wishful thinking perhaps.