Wife Bullied

I love it up until the piss at the end. BD reminds me of my wife's ex.

This was far fetched and not believable evn for a fantasy. The sex was hot but the ending was... stupid. And follow up?

What kind of pervert gets off on pissing on someone's face? YOU -- damn pervert

Another bully story that strains all credibility. I realize that it is fantasy, but something this improbable and nonsensical belongs in humor.

The guys son is bullying her son and the son is willing to go to the bully's house? Naaaah, not going to happen. Better to have written BD as an uninterested party from whom she seeks help.

Your descriptions are over the top. Word choice indicates you don't like women very much. Cunt, hog, etc.

I also disagree with the use of any kind of drug to get her into a sexual mood. This guy doesn't need it. I don't think his ego would let him use it. He's the exact opposite of her husband and will seduce her on the strength of his masculinity. She is primed by a lazy neglectful husband, to respond to a take charge guy. Plus he's the bad boy she needs to remind her that she's a woman.

R.