All Comments on 'Wife Ch. 03: Sandy'

by Dale Jane Henparty

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jenorma2012 over 5 years ago

not bad

I though it was an alright part

Danno_61455 over 5 years ago

Jean's Wedding was "our" wedding was it not

You slid into a third person roll when husband should have been stating facts as they applied to the couple.

Thanks for sharing

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I am a ‘Mature,’ by Literotica’s definition; I am living with a nasty thinking writer captured inside of me. The writer is mentally female and can create straight and special stories. She was named ‘Dale Jane Hen-Party’ by my family for three seasons when I was twelve years o...

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