All Comments on 'Wife Exposed at Resort'

Good start. But I suggest you pick a tense, and stick to it. Switching from past to present made it very difficult to follow the story.

Thanks, I know what you're saying, I didn't notice I'd switched tense.

I'll temper my eagerness to publish in future.

Lol, I honestly didn’t notice the change in tense, I was too engaged in the story. Very sexy, thanks for sharing

Tess (uk)

Lovely erotic start, 5 stars, hope it keeps getting hotter in next chapters. Thank You

Jennifer