All Comments on 'Wife Gets Her Payback'

Cross dressing, Gay Male and rape, just to name a few of the things in this garbage. Why would you post this crap in the loving wives section? NOBODY can be that stupid! This belongs in another category. You are going to get bombed in the LW category. This story was complete unadulterated trash, posted here to troll the readers. Consider me trolled and pissed off that you wasted my time. Reported to Literotica.

No stars

Comment: that should have been put in Fetish or Group Sex. I don't even know why the author forced a 'wife' angle in this, since she is more of a mistress to his MC then a spouse. Then again, there's barely a story to speak of here, so you can't be surprise to see its own author being confused as to where to properly put it.

Question: the story's titled "Wife Gets Her Payback"... payback for what?

I lost this thing after they drove home without talking. Total gibberish and that's being kind. I'll wait for a translation.

Yea you're definitely from California. Not southern.

I skipped it til the end after reading the first 2 sentences, a 'shutter' goes on a window, so was she really shuttering? 1*

Maybe this bitch needs a 'shutter' on her pussy, did you mean shudder? 1*

Sick shit.

This felt really rushed. Slow the pace a bit and add some details. Felt like I was running a race as I read it. Loved the content.

just another stupid hubby with a whore for a wife

It isn't anything but a fuck with a crowd of people. I would make a wide way to get away from this sleazy bunch.

And stupid filth at that. This one is on the admins for allowing such vile fetish material to be posted in this category.

To start with, why did he assume whom she was texting? What did he do that deserved payback? if she’s getting fucked on all fours while giving him head, how did he NOT notice the rocking? And if she’s getting pounded, how was she was able to take off his mask? If his asshole is loose after having dildos shoved in, how does his wife have a “super tight pussy”? Does she have a magic pussy that locks down tighter than an asshole?

These are just a few of the idiocies foisted on us, the readers, by the author who couldn’t even tell a stroke story without ruining it.

Stop writing asshole and take up crocheting.

When someone shakes momentarily it's called a

"SHUDDER." A shutter is in a camera or on a window.

The past tense of the verb "grind" is GROUND. Not "grinded."

Your subject matter appeals to some and not to others. If you are going to write, do it well.

R.

Loving being a whore, cheater, liar, a closeted size queen. Oh and the obvious porn addict who is desperate to live out his favorite video in real life. The best part of the latter is they are simply so twisted that they couldn't actually handle it in real life. They are the type that would become brb fans even though they created the entire situation themselves with their obsession rather than seek professional help.

This category is a haven for the cowards who are too afraid to act on their small dick fantasies and those who get off on calling the barbarians to our gate. Sometimes i think its time the visigoths showed up. God knows Rome is a joke.

An unengaging story about execrable characters, written poorly.

Ignore the trolls - it was well written!

Stop killing our aspiring Pullitzer winners!!!

Look at what you did to this guy! You ripped him apart, tore him a new one, destroyed and destructed him... You killed his ass... He's fried, he's toast, he's dead and buried!

Oh well, your comment dissing him was more interesting than his wannabe story! WTF! This author is TNT (Truly Not Talented)

Next!!!!

Yeah,... but no.

After reading both of your stories, other than a couple of grammatical errors, you're writing is not horrible and in fact its pretty good.

That being said, a few pointers:

Don't write in 2nd person (first story). Very annoying to most.

LW category is defined by the host as (something to the effect) as extramarital fun...by one or both parties so cheating, swinging, open marriages and various other arrangements seem to apply. More complete stories morph into consequences - BTB, RAAC or marriage excitement where everyone is happy and is having fun with threesomes (or more).

In your first story we had no idea who those peope were. Were their spouses passed out somewhere in this myterious undefined party? Were they watching or fucking themselves? Probably better in the Romance (?) category.

This story had that element (although it isnt clear to we readers if

they are husband and wife) but it ventured more into the fetish category which, judging from the more intelligible comments is where this story probably belongs. Also the ratings aren't near as harsh in that category.

Most readers of LW are straight males as far as I can tell. While most are probably not homophobes, reading about male gay activities is an instant turnoff. All stories that I've read that contain this get a strong negative reaction by guys that read this for sexual fuel.

Good luck

What a lucky husband...He gets reamed by a dildo and also gets a real Dick in his ass..Plus he gets to eat some yummy CUM...I like your story...

Enjoyed the story... I would give anything to have my wife be like that...I've sure tried for years butt NO luck