All Comments on 'Wife Goes Too Far'
by Sexybeast8899
- 93 Comments
Anonymousover 5 years agoSylvidoll should have caught several words used in the wrong context... Grammerly has a very good program...
Anonymousover 5 years agoVery very EROTIC.
Reasonably REALISTIC, not impossible.
Beth is the best.
Anonymousabout 5 years ago:-)
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoIs that stupid? She'd by finding her own way home and have to deal with all of the usual soon to be divorced cheating slut wife. As easy as she was it wouldn't have been her first time. Signed: BTW
Anonymousover 3 years agoSo far this story has got 92 "faves" out of 102,279 views which is 0.9 faves per 1,000 views (an excellent faves-to-views ratio!)
Beth is a keeper as a wife. She is a Loving Wife par excellence. β€β€
Beth is a keeper as a sales person. π΅ π΅
Beth is a keeper as a lover. π π
DenaliFXover 2 years agoThis is a fantastic story. Beth was a star except (maybe) as a wife, but Lisa was a spectacular as a 'wing man' allowing the sort term action to proceed for Beth to make her sale AND to have a spectacular orgasm while allowing Beth to seep her long term relationship together. These women have their shit together - the husband didn't stand a chance.
Anonymousover 2 years agoI 'm re-posting an older comment (abridged).
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Anon - about 1 year ago
In my book, this is AN EXCELLENT WIFE SEX STORY! It is very very EROTIC. It is 100% realistic, except for the 2nd last paragraph wich is "almost realistic".
Beth is a keeper as a wife. She is a Loving Wife par excellence. β€β€
Beth is a keeper as a sales person. π΅ π΅
Beth is a keeper as a lover. π π
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Anonymousabout 2 years agoI gave you a 5.0 = π―% (π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯) ππ!
Very erotic. True to life too. In a strange way, this story is also romantic.
* * *
For 12 years or so, my wife had a job which required air travel with overnight stay about 12 times a year. Our marriage survived. She loved me more and more. She was also getting better and better in bed (I guess that comes with the territory.)
No word of a lie.
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoI'm copy pasting another user's comment.
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DenaliFX - 10 months ago
This is a fantastic story. Beth was a star except (maybe) as a wife, but Lisa was a spectacular as a 'wing man' allowing the sort term action to proceed for Beth to make her sale AND to have a spectacular orgasm while allowing Beth to seep her long term relationship together. These women have their shit together - the husband didn't stand a chance.
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Sarahwithlovealmost 2 years agoHmmm, with all the emoticons, I am certain that they are from the same person, if not the actual author. Nevertheless, it was a hot story, but in response to other remarks, realistic it wasn't. But so what, I liked the way it was written and it got me ramped up. Main character, however, isn't long for this world if he keeps it up, lol.
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoAnon, 4 months ago
I gave you a 5.0 = π―% (π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯) ππ!
Very erotic. True to life too. In a strange way, this story is also romantic.
* * *
For 12 years or so, my wife had a job which required air travel with overnight stay about 12 times a year. Our marriage survived. She loved me more and more. She was also getting better and better in bed (I guess that comes with the territory.)
No word of a lie.
Anonymousalmost 2 years ago2 star
pathetic husband let the slut he married cuck him and no divorce
1st , last and only slut tells by this aithor 4 me
Anonymousover 1 year agoI really really LOVE this story: β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘ (5.0).
Beth is a KEEPER. End of story. Period.
Anonymousover 1 year agoI am copy pasting another user's comment.
"Anonymous, about 1 month ago
Anon, 4 months ago
I gave you a 5.0 = π―% (π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯) ππ!
Very erotic. True to life too. In a strange way, this story is also romantic.
* * *
For 12 years or so, my wife had a job which required air travel with overnight stay about 12 times a year. Our marriage survived. She loved me more and more. She was also getting better and better in bed (I guess that comes with the territory.)
No word of a lie."
Anonymousover 1 year agoExcerpt from the story (spoiler alert.)
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... My hand then moved a little up her thigh. Beth's hand was still on my hand. Lisa moved to the other side of the hot tub and was talking to Mark about staying longer. My hand continued its path upward on Beth's thigh. I stopped when it reached her panties. My fingers explored her g string for a moment. My finger finding the edge of the g string and pulled it up and to the side. Beth's hand was still on top of mine letting me proceed as I wanted. I then felt her shaved pussy...
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(In my book this is a five star story.)
Anonymousover 1 year agoBoth very very erotic and totally true to life, two-in-one. 5.0 (βββββ)!
Anonymousover 1 year agoI am copy pasting another user's comment.
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DenaliFX - about 1 year ago
This is a fantastic story. Beth was a star except (maybe) as a wife, but Lisa was a spectacular as a 'wing man' allowing the sort term action to proceed for Beth to make her sale AND to have a spectacular orgasm while allowing Beth to keep her long term relationship together. These women have their shit together - the husband didn't stand a chance.
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Anonymousover 1 year agoI am copy pasting a comment that says it all.
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Anonymous - over 3 years ago
Bravo! ππ! The scale is 1 to 5, but I gave u a 5.25 (105% "Exceeds Expectations")!
Erotic. Erotic. Erotic.
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Anonymousover 1 year agoπ π π π π (5.0)
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Anonymousover 1 year agoExcellent: β β β β β (5.0)!
Beth is in sales. If she were my wife, I would let her deal with big buyers as she sees fit.
In my book she is a keeper. Period.
Anonymousover 1 year agoβββββ (5)
I agree with BuzzCzar, 22 days ago:
"Hot story, well told."
Anonymousover 1 year agoI am copy pasting another user's comment.
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DenaliFX, about 1 year ago
This is a fantastic story. Beth was a star except (maybe) as a wife, but Lisa was a spectacular as a 'wing man' allowing the short term action to proceed for Beth to make her sale AND to have a spectacular orgasm while allowing Beth to keep her long term relationship together. These women have their shit together - the husband didn't stand a chance.
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Excellent, β β β β β (5)!
DpL0verover 1 year agoPros:
Hot. Ass. Bitch. (I say this as a female). Very erotic story, love the fact that Beth decided to fuck the main character and have him cum in her pussy. Love bareback.
Cons: As another commenter mentioned, maybe use Grammarly; I'd suggest typing your story in word and checking with it with Grammarly or similar before pasting into Litrotica, as you don't have the benefit of a professional copy editor π€·ββοΈ
Please keep writing!
Anonymousover 1 year agoπ π π π π (5.0)
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Anonymousover 1 year agoWIFE GOES TOO FAR is an excellent story: βββββ (5.0)! In my book it is a must-read.
Anonymousover 1 year agoIrresistibly erotic. True to life. A must-read.
Beth is a Loving Wife par excellence.
In my book, she deserves to have:
(a) a loving husband, and
(b) a powerful-cum-horny client.
Anonymousover 1 year agoI am copy pasting an older comment because it struck the cord with me.
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Anonymous3 months ago
Excellent: β β β β β (5.0)!
Beth is in sales. If she were my wife, I would let her deal with big buyers as she sees fit.
In my book she is a keeper. Period.
End quote.
Anonymousover 1 year agoBeth is a keeper.
I wish I were a major buyer in her line of business. I am sure that would be rewarding.
βββββ (5)!
Anonymousover 1 year agoThe writing was too mechanical. It lacked sensuality or hot excitement. Not descriptive enough. Didn't give me a boner.
Anonymousover 1 year agoEventually all these business with desert on the side always come out. Someone blabs, someone sees, and the reports get around and a spouse finds out. Eventually. Then, adios amigo or amiga! As it should be. This particular story example is too detached to convey the emotional tone needed.
Anonymousover 1 year agoI really really liked this story,
gave you a 5 (five).
The story was written from the point of view of a well-to-do businessman. Whereas he was a rather tough purchasing negotiator, she was keen to make a big sale. She readily accepted the fact her body was going to be a barganing chip on the table.
Anonymousover 1 year agoI really really liked this story,
gave you a 5 (five).
The story was written from the point of view of a well-to-do businessman. Whereas he was a rather tough purchasing negotiator, she was keen to make a big sale. She readily accepted the fact her body was going to be a barganing chip on the table.
Anonymousover 1 year agoI am copy pasting someone else's comment in lieu of my own.
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Anonymous, about 2 months ago
Irresistibly erotic. True to life. A must-read.
Beth is a Loving Wife par excellence.
In my book, she deserves to have:
(a) a loving husband, and
(b) a powerful-cum-horny client.
End quote.
5.0 = 100%!
OlFrog14xabout 1 year agoI have a hard time believing that Mark will manage to overlook both the spread labia and the dripping cum over the next hour.
I hope Lisa treats him better.
Anonymousabout 1 year agoBeth is a marriage &/or LTR material,
and a keeper! I mean this.
ΔΉoved this story. Rated it 5.0 = 100%!
Anonymous10 months agoAnonymous - over 1 year ago
I gave you a 5.0 = π―% (β β β β β ) ππ!
Very erotic. True to life too. In a strange way, this story is also romantic.
* * *
For 12 years or so, my wife had a job which required air travel with overnight stay about 12 times a year. Our marriage survived. She loved me more and more. She was also getting better and better in bed (I guess that comes with the territory.)
No word of a lie.
Anonymous10 months agoMy kind of wife sex story.
Anonymousover 1 year ago
I gave you a 5.0 = π―% (β β β β β ) ππ!
Very erotic. True to life too.
In a strange way, this story is also romantic.
* * *
For 12 years or so, my wife had a job which required air travel with overnight stay about 12 times a year. Our marriage survived. She loved me more and more. She was also getting better and better in bed (I guess that comes with the territory.)
No word of a lie.
Dr_James_Davies_DF9 months agoPreliminary negotiations
A businesswoman's roust in the hot tub with an interested customer leads to a contract. The customer is interested; she needs to spice up the deal. Somehow, the benefits which induce the deal manage to occur unnoticed by the woman's husband while he's standing nearby.
thomas_dean9 months agoMAKING THE SALE
Beth is at a business convention with her friend Lisa and her husband Mark, along for a free vacation. She meets a buyer for a desirable account. She's into her sales pitch, but the buyer is tired. Anxious to make the deal, Beth coaxes the buyer into the hotel's hot tub. Herr husband nearby nonetheless unaware, Beth puts out a maximum effort to secure the deal.
Advertisers and marketers do say sex sells.
Anonymous8 months agoScreaming for the entire pool can hear, yet somehow her husband who is 30 feet away can't? Have you ever done anything in a pool room? Sound bounces off every wall.
It probably would have been hotter and more interesting if she had been subtle... The glaring issues took me out of the story.
The pacing was too fast and well. Needed some more time to bake.
Anonymous8 months agoShe's busy yelling that filled the pool area, but her husband couldn't hear 30 feet away? In a pool room?! Have you been in a pool room? Every sound binces off every wall. The unlikely scenario was too much and took me out. Could have been really hot had she been subtle and daring, instead you get blatant and daring, but thankfully her husband is blind and deaf.
And the writing itself was too forced. Spewing words out as fast as the writer could without letting them bake and build.
2/5 stars. Decent premise, poor execution.
cindycbegood3 months agoThe writing was repetitive. The writing seemed to repeat itself. The writing said the same thing over and over. That interfered with the flow of reading. Repeating thoughts made the story harder to read. Please do at least a tiny bit of editing.
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