All Comments on 'Wife has to Deal with Hubby's Dad Ch. 01'

Fun Start!

Can't wait for your next chapter.

Thank You!

Very exciting, love to see where this one goes

The story was well written, and had a good plot. You just had a few typos that you should have corrected next time you publish. Keep it up.

A terrific start, she's now putty in her hands, let's hope he uses and abuses her.

Came so hard. Twice.

Kindly make part 2. Would love to know what happens!

When we read the full syory

Good premise for a story but I could only give you 2 stars. There were so many careless typos it’s evident you didn’t even run a simple spell check on it. Also, a lot of run-on sentences, huge paragraphs, and improperly formatted dialogue. Take your time with your next submission. Proof read it, or better yet, get someone else to do it. You can be good at this with a little more effort.

thanks for the feedback! it's been updated now, with some fixes for typos that were pointed out by you guys :)