All Comments on 'Wife Is Bound And Used By All'

by captaindave1

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Tenses ffs!

I was, I am all in the 1st line. If it's that bad to start I dread what it's like after.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Confusing

I agree with the last comment. Please redo the initial paragraphs with either present or past tenses. Needs some work but could be good.

Sucker2Sucker2over 2 years ago

Sexy story...not knowing is definitely a lot of its allure...the best sex organ in the body is truly the mind.

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