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'it takes very little for her to become inhibited'-line 4. Not much evidence of that!

Based on this sad story she's too immature to be allowed to drink at all.

What's with all the censored words? You can't write "orgasm" in this forum?

First the author, using that word loosely, does not know the somewhat fancy word for drunk so using an incorrect word or inhibited. Far be it from me to teach vocabulary. The the plotting is weak and uninteresting. There is no characterization that is understandable. I understand the want to write for others but practice first and then read the story aloud to at least self edit before subjecting others to an unfinished product.

what class are you talking idiot ?

come back when you have a story and not nothing at all

What a heap of utter ****.

Your story reads as a true experience. Some of the readers here expect every story to be fiction and go according to a dream. Personally, I prefer the stories that are or appear to be, true. Yours was a great & hot story and you're lucky to have such a classy and hot wife. Please keep sharing your experiences.

Poorly written