All Comments on 'Wife Pays Interest For Husband'

by kamal12345

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26thNC26thNCalmost 4 years ago

"Zahida, we will fuck like dogs now." Is one of the classier lines in this sloppy mess.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Daddy can I have Kamal ride,can I ?

No baby, this animal is unpredictable! See, it have 1* on its forehead.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Sir, can I have a Kamal ride, please ?

No Johny ! This animal is stupid and vicious ! See, it have a star on its forehead. Like this- 1* !

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Daddy...daddy, can I have a kamal ride?? Can I ... can I ???

No baby,this animal is stupid and vicious!! No!

angel228angel228over 17 years ago
Keep up the good work

Its always good when the theme is a bit subtle like this one. The other story where an employee's wife, mother and daughter are involved is crude. Focus on plot development, you are a natural otherwise.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Beautiful story

I loved the fuck scenes. The way he shoved his cock deep and planted cum in the other guy's wife was a real turn-on. Keep writing. I thoroughly enjoyed this story. It was a real wanker.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Nice

I liked the way it was written. You could probably add another chapter to this to keep the story going.

Nice work Kamal

ddpmanddpmanabout 18 years ago
Great

I sure like your descriptions. The word pictures you draw make me feel as if I am there. Wife and money interest needs more clarifcation. Did the husband set this up? or Not?

Liked the story

ddpmanddpmanabout 18 years ago
Great

I sure like your descriptions. The word pictures you draw amke me feel as if I am there. Wife and interest neds more clarifcation.

Liked the story

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