by kamal12345
"Zahida, we will fuck like dogs now." Is one of the classier lines in this sloppy mess.
No baby, this animal is unpredictable! See, it have 1* on its forehead.
No Johny ! This animal is stupid and vicious ! See, it have a star on its forehead. Like this- 1* !
No baby,this animal is stupid and vicious!! No!
Its always good when the theme is a bit subtle like this one. The other story where an employee's wife, mother and daughter are involved is crude. Focus on plot development, you are a natural otherwise.
I loved the fuck scenes. The way he shoved his cock deep and planted cum in the other guy's wife was a real turn-on. Keep writing. I thoroughly enjoyed this story. It was a real wanker.
I liked the way it was written. You could probably add another chapter to this to keep the story going.
Nice work Kamal
I sure like your descriptions. The word pictures you draw make me feel as if I am there. Wife and money interest needs more clarifcation. Did the husband set this up? or Not?
Liked the story
I sure like your descriptions. The word pictures you draw amke me feel as if I am there. Wife and interest neds more clarifcation.
Liked the story