by DWornock
Idiot this is a fantasy world where we can experience that which will never happen in real life so just enjoy the talents of someone who is willing to have a go rather than sit on the sidelines and bully everyone else. Idiot. I enjoyed the story.
So what exactly is wrong with an “adolescent little dick licker,” Anonymous?
Please ignore the comment from Anon., DWornock, and write more about what excites you.
Wonderful start, Wish we got more on what Emma Looked like. but not bad
Does it henance the story that she ends up pregnant and hinting who the father is, no in fact it spoils it. I liked the thought of her stripping and having sex with her brother in law and friends, but once ovulatinging was mentioned, I basically lost interest. It had the makings of a 5* , but ended up with 2* could you possibly tell me what that gave to the story qeteshhunt@gmail.com
I have read a few stories and this person is obsessed with talking about the female ovulating and saying that's when she's her horniest or some other crap. A no from me. 1 star. stop talking about the chicks ovulating. egats.
Was there a story here? (sic)
If so, I couldn't find it. What little I read was boring so I skipped most of it. (sic)
Now I wonder what kind of numpty would possibly leave a stupid comment like that on a story. Oh yes of course, some brain dead idiot who calls himself "DWornock"
Big old 1 for lack of imagination. In other words, I couldn't even imagine liking this story.
18 a load of rubbish really, every one of the comments seem to have sung from the same hymn sheet, which is unusual.