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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Wife Upstairs

Nice premise but a poor tale.

Learn the difference between to and too.

And what is a guarder belt? You know, if you check out some of the women's fashions, you might get a clue and learn to spell properly. This leaves me with the impression you're in fourth grade.

This has the trappings of a minus two, but I'll be generous and give you one star.

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I have dabbled in poetry and fiction writing, I race (NASCAR licensed), hike, fly, and lots more. Life is once so let's live it to the fullest.