by ILoveMarriedWomen
It's her birthday...yeah we know. You said that too many times
Three's enough. The beginning, somewhere in the middle and at the end with the final birthday kiss.
Too much, two stars.
If any Anonymous complainer were to have such an act happen either for them or to create such an event, we authors might keep their remarks for posterity. This waw a great read. I could explain the heavy use of the birthday as the focal, or cause of the events you clearly made HOT. Good story, thanks. 5*
Your offering just goes to confirm, that patience and persistence pays off. And it appears that chapter 2 will provide evidence that additional dividends are forthcoming.