All Comments on 'Wife's Incestuous Family Ritual Ch. 04'

Outstanding! Awesome end to an awesome series. I wanted to see Nikhil have sex with his mother but never thought it'd be this romantic and heartfelt. The slow build-up with that focus on the mother's gradual falling for her son was brilliantly done. Sad to see this series end, but glad that the end was so beautiful.

Absolutely fabulous story. Excellent twist with the religious aspect. Great pace, differing from couple to couple, mama needed to be slow, like it was. Would give 10 out of 10 if I could. Romantic, sensual and sexy

Well done.Smoothly, eased. Your explanation of feelings, both primal and man made are so very true in all faiths across the planet. It's the social man's way of controlling the masses. If it's to good, make it taboo, dirty, a sin, even a crime. We should remember that we were all spauned from incest in the beginning. To say that incest birthed malformed offspring might be true, but no more than genetic problems in birth from unrelated parents. There are probably more incest humans walking the plant than we realize,especially when mom is hot, dad is ignoring her, and she needs servicing. Quite often as not, mom will look to a son, or dad will look to a daughter for the necessary affection needs, before they go outside the family for it. Some may say incest is a joke, played by a few to control their greed. Hyrems are a good example. History has a way of showing

if our forefathers were right or wrong. Good editing and grammar. Keep writing.

XYZ

Marvelous! Well written, respectful, touching connection between family. We all have a spiritual connection to one another, even tho we allow antiquated social mores to dictate what's acceptable and what is not. Shame should be reserved only for those things that bring pain and suffering to others.

Terrific Avatar!! Splendid ending and you made up - for this reader - the somewhat off Chapter 4. Had commented on it earlier. A pity this series had to end but I note you have mentioned that you would think about bringing them elsewhere - for a cameo perhaps? Pls do. Would have liked a few more scenes of social nudity amongst the 6 but that's a minor nit. Great job again!

It turns out Part 4 of your story is a grand conclusion to a wonderful love story ... voted you another 5 stars. Doesn't matter if it is incest, "love" is the main theme in this story. Humankind certainly needs more love. :-) Narration, dialogue and description was well laid out and realistic. You as a writer have great potential and I hope you will continue in your writing endeavors. Now I'm interested to read the other stories you've previously wrote. I've added you on my "favourites" list. Can't wait to see your next creation. Cheers !

Great story. I love the way you slowly led up to the final act between mother and son. I found the balcony scenes very believable and erotic. Please keep writing. I enjoyed a jill or two, but need your erotic scenes to be a bit longer :-)

If you read my stories you will see I am fascinated by the circumstances in which incestious fantasy becomes reality. I had / have those fantasies but never turned them into reality. Sharing them with my husband is good fun though !! We enjoyed reading your stories to each other…. thank you

It is beautifully written, slow and gradual buildup to the climax. There are no extremities or violent orgies. Mother opening herself for her son and son worshipping his mother and copulating with her realising his deep incestuous desire for his mother. Beautiful!!!!

Beautiful expressions of love.

Wonderful story. My only remark is mom cheating on her husband who cant really help having diabetes.He is the loser in this story.

Whenever cheating is involved i rarely give more than 2 stars. Because i liked the rest of the story I still gave 3

The relations between the others give me also a feeling of cheating although it shoulnt. I think incest should be more personal than shared between the 3 couples (and the goddess:)

Pure love and pure carnal desire. It is too sexy and erotic.

Me Raj and my wife Shubha have enjoyed these things as fantasy and enjoy now also. Now we are 58 and 56. We did get courage to do it in real life.

We opened up after reading human digest, rasvanti and mohini sex stories. After reading incest stories we both used to get excited and we used to make passionate sex. We started discussing and then one day I asked shubha to imagine her father Dilip and vocalise it while making love....That was blast.....

After that I imagined my mother saraswati...Then we did not stop...We imagined my father shriram fucking shubha, and I fucking my mother saraswati....Then dilo fucking shubha and I fuck my mother in law rukmini......Then...Me, shubha, dilip , rukmini, saraswati and shriram , 6 of us making out together all combinations,including sanditch, filling all three holes of any one lady by three males and ...It was and is....Too good and hot... Wish I could have fucked my mother and mother in law in real life and seen shubha fucking getting fucked by her and my father.....I love family fuck

You are great dear friend.

This reminds me my first sex with my younger sister....Vaishali , she was 17.5 and I was 20.....How we over a period of three months transformed from brother sister to lovers....It all started on raksha bandhan when she was bending down and tieing rakhi to my hand ...I was looking at her cleavage and she Catched my gaze and smiled..

We brother and sister used stay at district place in rented room for college.....

That night I started touching her slowly she responded and within three months from touch to total passionate love....We do all the things including piss drinking and...All..after her marriage and my marriage it stopped for 5 years and again we started to make love few times a year.

Me and vaishali both lost our spouses in corona first wave in June 2020.

Now we meet at weekends at her place or my place and we are living like lovers ....For those two days ...Longing gor next weekend...I am 59 and she is 57 now....It is really pure, hot and passionate to fuck your own sister ....

Really enjoyed this story. Nicely paced and I liked the religious mystical elements in the story. I liked the gradual seduction and the gentle reverence he has for his mother and her "sacred place". Big 5 stars and my favourite story of yours. Would love a further chapter detailing how their relationship progresses and perhaps Ayush could take a wife and it could detail her own induction into the family

A beautifully told series. I’ve given this story, as well as the preceding ones five stars all around ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️