All Comments on 'Wifey Love - Tested'

So, no sex, no cheating, no nothing

why is this in LW?

No ethics or morality? What church does he attend, because I would love to hear that pastor speak.

The husband is a jerk!

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Is there another part? This is only part of a story.

What was the point of this story exactly? I guess Mike cheated, but who knows.

Not even hall a story. Chapter One?

Ok, well that seemed like an introduction. The story could go many ways. Giving his unknowing wife a truth serum could certainly lead to all kinds of disasters. This definitely needs a follow up.

Same story posted earlier. Nothing new here.

And the purpose of this was ???

Well, seems a good start. A little short on what this is all about but willing to wait for longer chapters of her adventures to cum.

I do hope this is going somewhere, besides him being a dick in the future.

Weird!! I not certain of the reason for this test. Is he trying to find out if his wife having an affair? In my opinion give the reader nothing. Finish the story or quit writing.

The coffee aroma would have been wafting between them - the only thing waffling was the 'author'.

So many folks sitting at home with nothing productive to be done has seen the non productive phenomena extend to a plethora of very amateurish efforts. Perhaps all new stories should have an approximate reading time attached so that those of us well into our time on earth can judge as to whether to bother with weak, unfinished efforts such as this?

Nothing much happened, but based on author’s other work it will go downhill from here.

Should have skipped this one. No tags. Low rating. I blame myself for failing to heed those red flags.

I really did not get any idea of what this was about *

How is this erotica? Lol she also spoke rather coherently for somebody drugged. You angered the guy above me so much I think he had a stroke

This was a story?

Read more on the side of corn flakes package.

No back story, no characterisation, no point.

Good premise.

But barely a beginning.

Three stars.

Not the most ethical of starts

This is just unfinished crap.

Sometimes I wonder about these attempts for stories of 750 words or less (or something approximating them). I loved the idea of the story, but to me, most stories need a beginning, ending, and conclusion. You did well on the first two parts, but it totally lacked a conclusion. I did not see where the author indicated that there would be a part 2 or not. For those reasons, I gave it a 3.

WHat is the difference with "Q&A - Stage 01 "? When will Q&A - Stage 03 be published? Looking forward to it and see how this will pan out...

This is fantasy world, and this therapy has some ethical issue, curious if she will she found out or these sessions / revelations will change her/them in a positive way.

Very weak...Not interesting...1*

Next I think you should write a story. I hope to read it. Thanks for the practice.

sad to say but this is a duplicate story.

I hope he doesn’t ask her If I have been fucking her hot and hard for the last eight years!

interesting but I think I have read something like this here before 3*