All Comments on 'Wild Adventure at the Pyramids'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Whore and skank if a wife brings home an std for her hubby? Awful woman.

GothicmonGothicmonalmost 3 years ago
So porny

Wow. I got lost narrative and the location when I realized I was hard by the scene later. This is probably your most Hemingway, but what do I know I never finished college. Now I need a cigarette craving your next tail. (pun intended)

away443away443almost 3 years agoAuthor

Now read 'Bench Seat Wife' and close the loop. ;-)

MarthaMcKinleyMarthaMcKinleyalmost 3 years ago

I liked the narrator's parenthetical commentary as the plot thickened.

DxstebbDxstebbalmost 2 years ago

Favorite so far! Fun trying to read inconspicuously around the family. More please.

centralsquareguycentralsquareguyover 1 year ago
Very fun...

loved: "It wasn't that I didn't love my husband and wanted sex on the side, it was the opposite. Sex on the side enabled me to love him on my own terms without them having to compete." Just perfect!

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"What the fuck did I just read?" is the best compliment I could get. At the last count, 1.1 million reads of my perverted stories, and at a conservative ratio, I claim at least a quarter million masturbators to my works.