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Wow. I got lost narrative and the location when I realized I was hard by the scene later. This is probably your most Hemingway, but what do I know I never finished college. Now I need a cigarette craving your next tail. (pun intended)
I liked the narrator's parenthetical commentary as the plot thickened.
Favorite so far! Fun trying to read inconspicuously around the family. More please.
loved: "It wasn't that I didn't love my husband and wanted sex on the side, it was the opposite. Sex on the side enabled me to love him on my own terms without them having to compete." Just perfect!