All Comments on 'Wild Child Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
WTF??

What happened to Chapter Three?

TxRadTxRadover 14 years agoAuthor
Chapter 3 out of order

Lit seems to have posted the Chapters out of order. Chapter 3 is show on my list as being out tomorrow. Sorry about that.

Tx

Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassover 14 years ago
Those girls are hot!

No matter the chapter number, the writing was hot--the girls were hot. Smoking even. And poor Uncle Rick :) sits there trying to keep his cool. How I wish I were Uncle Rick... Eagerly awaiting the next chapter--whatever it is.

viking3viking3over 14 years ago
HEY

HURRY UP FOR HEAVEN'S SAKE!!! i CAN'T MISS ANYMORE TIME OFF WORK WAITING. AND i SURE CAN'T GO TO WORK LOOKING LIKE THIS. HELL, I CAN'T EVEN WALK.

VIKING3

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Wild Child

good stuff - believable and good dialogue. I'd even read Chapter 5.

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75 year old guy that worked in the oil fields of Texas for 41 years and writes because he has to..... Nudist, loves the outdoors, ex stock car racer, likes to have fun... If you're not happy then you're doing something wrong...

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