by TxRad
Lit seems to have posted the Chapters out of order. Chapter 3 is show on my list as being out tomorrow. Sorry about that.
Tx
No matter the chapter number, the writing was hot--the girls were hot. Smoking even. And poor Uncle Rick :) sits there trying to keep his cool. How I wish I were Uncle Rick... Eagerly awaiting the next chapter--whatever it is.
HURRY UP FOR HEAVEN'S SAKE!!! i CAN'T MISS ANYMORE TIME OFF WORK WAITING. AND i SURE CAN'T GO TO WORK LOOKING LIKE THIS. HELL, I CAN'T EVEN WALK.
VIKING3
good stuff - believable and good dialogue. I'd even read Chapter 5.