All Comments on 'Wild Flower Ch. 09'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
So Angelo’s new leading man appears

Interesting, Christian seems an interesting character, and I’m sure will keep Miguel on his toes. Oh I hope Mark starts with finger breaking, that will be lovely. Lambert will suffer greatly, I truly hope he is actually killed. I’m hoping that Miguel will get Alicia safely out of there and working for him.

kelvinvictorkelvinvictorover 6 years ago

I think I like Christian as he may be the tonic that will make Angelo whole again. He just seems right for him and strangely it feels like the two need to the other just as much ...

Loving the story ... thanks Van!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Overdone

The basic story is okay,but your overuse of- beautiful, perfect and such is too much.

It jumps around so much it is sometimes hard to follow. It is obvious English is not your first language so a lot can be overlooked, but you really need an editor.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

I like the story so much but I think Angelo/Miguel is rude and doesn’t consider other people’s feeling, in fact he doesn’t give a shit about other people. You’d almost feel like someone who has been a near death experience would have an introspection and look within himself and want to become a better person. Maybe it’s just me but I almost feel like he deserved the betrayal not the rape though coz no one deserves that brutality. It almost feels like that happened so that he could change and start appreciating people and everyone around him.

josranvictorjosranvictorover 6 years ago
whats wrong with anons??? how can u say that Angel deserved the betrayal?? do u hav come sense?? ahaa..Lets assume he died,wud he hav achance again to redeem?? and follow the story plz Angel toked lyk that both to the maid and Brian b'se he was stressed,u

THIS JUST BEGINNING,HEHE

josranvictorjosranvictorover 6 years ago
OH VAN U KEEP ON SUPRISING ME AND.....HOORAY THE TRUE MAN IS HERE!!!!

Hahaha,oh am so happy van...finally u've brought our man to us,CHRISTIAN hahahaha and he's all i want,his ways,the way he looked at Miguel deep in the eyes......The way he caught Angel's arm when he was about to slap him...His gentleness,oh those tricks i actually laughed when used william as aname to enter Angel's office..It made me ahappy guy,man I LOVE CHRISTIAN,infact he is my new vanalas...hey get me right in his stories every guy in Luis position is[MY VANALAS](winks,winks)hahaha mwaah

for him the first time i've seen him,i've loved him but i hated that.....gabriel as u call him the first tym i saw him...Oh how was the bumping scene???Hmmmmm?? I'l answer that(R.O.M.A.N.T.I.C)

Hahaha..am in love for sure

josranvictorjosranvictorover 6 years ago

Aaah..anons stop annoying me,am so happy u cant ruin my mood..how could u say that van using beautiful,wonderful....is arepetition???well may be he should stop using names of the characters,becoz in that case they are also repetitions..In conclusion all words ar relevant

poor Alicia..She made me cry but i hope Angel rescue her for sure it fuckin kills when i see those pits in our house..God i hate them..I hate their smiles of cartoons...DAMN THEM.hehe i lyked it when Angel denied josh,blah blah ahand shake..Uhmmm that was my mwaaah part..Huuuum

Hahahah.For the mighty lambert...Hahahahahaha my 4th favourite part in this chapter after CHRISTIAN was 'DID I CHANGE THAT MUCH'part...man Lambert was bombed hehe and i love that...Lambert deserves may be....Ascorpion bite!?? b'se that guy....I wish mark finished him off once..but Uh-uh,that wouldnt be enough...Oh why do i even worry THE CROWNED KING OF WRITERS is in the regime..hope u know him

josranvictorjosranvictorover 6 years ago

hehehehe..how did u see Angel revealing the true identity scene??? fantastic uh?? poor foolish lambert.....HE'S IN TROUBLE AND WHO CARES???

i want them to pay all of them plus that cartoon josh...die in hell motherfucker

am sori,i was so fixed and my phone wasnt with me so i got it late and i could tolerate it seeing that i had missed...am sori van

uhmmm i love Chriguell combination hehehd..FIRE..i would lyk to see Angel happy with christian..Plz its our turn to be happy

hmmmmn..The theme song is dedicated to Christian...Perfect-Ed sheeran,that theme song is addition to the songs u gave us

am sori i shudnt have added b'se urs was my choice but..christian got me crazy

Hmmmm..Aquestion,do u think Brian is compatible with........?

vanalasvanalasover 6 years agoAuthor
Thank you.

Thank you so much guys for your comments and your great love. josranvictor, thank you so much for your great love and wonderful comments.

I love you all.

chapter 10 is already posted and it's on its way.

josranvictorjosranvictorover 6 years ago

van why are u thanking us??? i mean its our PLEASURE u entertaining us

and thank u for thinking about me,its my pleasure being in ur comment and.....I LOVE U SO MUCH[winks,

winks] plz van post soon

josranvictorjosranvictorover 6 years ago

for sure vanalas we need achapter consisting of only the chriguell combination,..Guys Christian is so crazy and...Hahahaha man,the guy just makes me happy,haha..Do u know that i re-read the chapter 4 times but i re-read page 2,3 and 4 twice each time???Man Christian is making me crazy and......(I lyk it when he's poor mmhmmm,hahaha)mwaaah

guys do u think van has afriend called George??? i've asked becoz its the second time i've seen the character George after THE GREAT STAND FOR LOVE Regime u remember???

yah i think he also has an enemy called jake becoz he also appeared twice negatively in GREAT DESTINED LOVERS (D.L) Reign and S.F.L

hmmm Van u lied,today u didnt post..And i'l punish u by reading chapter 9 again,starting by now

Chancem77Chancem77over 6 years ago
Great Chapter

Getting exciting. Can't wait to read more.

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