by vanalas
Thanks for this chapter and I wish Miguel have a mercy in is Heart
Coz he became a cold monster I don't like that
Please vanalas
Do something
really appreciate it if you can give us an update on your other story: 'destined hearts'
thank you...
First thing if first. I've been waiting for this update for what feels like forever.
Then here it goes...
Christian fucked Carter. Great. Really, really great. Or was it? Seriously? WTF!
I'm with Peter, he's a fucked up, messed up jerk. His cowardice is fucking killing me, dude.
Carter and Brandon, they were something else. They are an epitome of how fucking lust make people go mad.
And as for Miguel, you're putting too much weight on him. And I hate that 'cause it is destroying him.
I was so busy that I cudnt submit so quick comments that wud make me look afool in front of king van yet I was the first to read the story so..........hahaha what makes Chris cry as afool???? Huh,he wanted this ....that fool made amistake and failed to believe Angel as f that was not enough,he went on and slept with carter huh that stinking whore carter but hey even some fools are genuinely fucked up but no worries we'r going to teach 'em a lesson,I want Chris to suffer more Luis did,for sure l won't forgive him if he doesn't get enough,,,, I want him horny,yearning and sad huh ......I expected him to be reasonable at least but t seems he z more foolish than the culprits themselves...he has to pay
Do u know what,I wanted Yvette to tell Miguel but he'z also rude and cudnt allow her but man t fucking hurts me ,,,,,that fool cheated on us but ts OK,,,HE WILL PAY IF NOT,THEN MIGUEL Z NOT THE "LA DON"........ Man I don't kno f am crazy but Marcus' death hurt me a lot,we he was a bitch but at least he wud've stayed and hey guys....yah we have Alex as the last dragon but to me Brandon's devil side shud be compared to Gabriel and jack rememba he killed already and knows much about us so am fearing him more everyday.... He z the 3rd savage culprit now,,,,Let's watch out ma fellows
So Yvette finally new the truth???? I was so happy ,,so happy that she poured it out and good fruits came out,now I want kno how that brat carter will react after knowing that hehehe and how that fucker Chris will look after knowing he fucked his brother in law,,,,hahahahahahag I can't wait but mostly,I can't wait for the awaited revenge huh those pits Gabriel and jack have to pay or else I'll die......what's up with Brian??? Huh???? Plv van don't make him betraye us we need him and yap Miguel shud calm down,fyn let him be rude to culprits but at least cool at home OK????...but not to Chris Hugh,....I want him horny and yearning for Miguel,,,,let him pay
Sure I expected Miguel to react in a different way to Brandon but I pray to God that he becomes serious with him and careful....I want him to totally erase him off but man he also have problems he Knox abt us Fuck.....I hope Miguel doesn't become weak because of carter,I want him to steal be rude and yah I want Yvette to tell carter the truth and to Alicia, poor woman I don't know about her plz inform us prince but trust I feel lyk not wanting to talk about Gabriel and jack but those won't get away with it....now ts pay back Van,,,plz bring t on allllllllllll OK????? Let Miguel be free from this stressss and let us get justice, make him happy bring our man back van plz and don't take fucking ten years to post van plzzzzzzz
Well well,,,,,I missed u and D.H of course and plz post soon.
,,,,,,theme song z cry me a river by Justin Timberlake trust me,Chris has to cry
Wow... Worst story ever. I wasted over how is my life by reading the first sentence of every paragraph. It was honestly painful. You write like an adolescent boy that has never been in love or a relationship.
For the love of God stop with the skinny jeans and ponytails. Who wants a man that looks like that anyway? God knows I don't