All Comments on 'Wild Oats - The Party'

by twistedgraygoat

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thebuffalothebuffaloover 9 years ago

Interesting enough idea, but story is screaming for serious polishing and editing. The attempt at dialogue is a total failure.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Nice story

The story is nice sexy and a bit short while moving very quickly. Some more events shall be good add on

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