All Comments on 'Wild Party led to…'

Excellent short

5/5

That was a fun read. I would

love to read more from you.

It worked for me. Sounds like a great earlier life for you. Kudos on the story

I thought your story was very unique and I liked it. I think you should describe the characters (enhancing the story line) so the reader can "think" about the story better. You are an author who just requires spicing up your stories. CHEERS