by Ron Marsh
Thank you. Great read. This is the first one I have read of yours, but I am going to do the rest now.
Appreciate the great story.
Regards,
-Pultoy
and totally enjoyed this one. Hope to see more of this one continued or i will be on the look out for anything new from you. respectfully naynay
This story is an uncommon mix of elements, the classical music and the topless bar stripper. I especially liked the touch about the $300/hour price serving to drive away the customers.
Write on!
-- KVK
This was a story with a splendid beginning. Certainly one of the very best I've ever read. But you could have developed the characters a bit further before bringing in the sex. This one had the potential to be a classic, instead of the just 'good story' that it is....
A really good read. Moved along at just the right pace, went far enough - and left room for plenty more.
First of yours that I've read... and I'm well impressed!