All Comments on 'Wild Sunflowers'

by Ron Marsh

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Alien47Alien47over 18 years ago
Great story...

A really good read. Moved along at just the right pace, went far enough - and left room for plenty more.

First of yours that I've read... and I'm well impressed!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Why..........

This was a story with a splendid beginning. Certainly one of the very best I've ever read. But you could have developed the characters a bit further before bringing in the sex. This one had the potential to be a classic, instead of the just 'good story' that it is....

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
very nice story

This story is an uncommon mix of elements, the classical music and the topless bar stripper. I especially liked the touch about the $300/hour price serving to drive away the customers.

Write on!

-- KVK

txrosenaynaytxrosenaynayover 18 years ago
Excellent....

and totally enjoyed this one. Hope to see more of this one continued or i will be on the look out for anything new from you. respectfully naynay

PultoyPultoyover 18 years ago
Well done

Thank you. Great read. This is the first one I have read of yours, but I am going to do the rest now.

Appreciate the great story.

Regards,

-Pultoy

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