All Comments on 'Will He Size Up? Ch. 01'

Waiting to see where this goes.

I'm really enjoying the story so far. Personally, I like the pacing a lot. Nothing wrong with building the story up a bit more slowly. Nice work.

This is looking great. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the good work!

This is one of the hottest stories I ever read, wow! I l o v e the build up and can't wait to see what will happen between them! Keep going, you're writing way too well! <3

This was great! I hope we get more overt femdom in the next chapter!

Great Story, thank you for sharing it.

I love this story so far and have been checking every few days since December for part two. Any word on when we can expect it?

Fantastic plot. Look forward for more !!!

The first chapter in this story is very well written, with a nice build up that takes its time while never bogging down. However, the build of the female character Holly is pretty far stretched (6 foot 9!). A girl six foot nine would also be unlikely to be a mere 34 chest measurement. (An M-cup is unusual but not incredible). That quibble aside, this is an excellent story in the making.