All Comments on 'Will He Size Up? Ch. 07'

I don't get it. Holly is huge and the guy is average to small, she's got a huge ass but there is no anilingus or anal penetration? there were a lot of missed opportunities to flesh this series of stories out even more...

I agree anon. Through many of the chapters it looks like things are being set up for a harem but it's only just been Holly and the guy basically the whole time through

This is a really good premise for a story and I've enjoyed it the whole way through, so it'd be amazing if there were more chapters in the future. I totally get if you're too busy, but just know that plenty of people love your story and it'd mean a lot if you gave us even one more chapter of this. :)

Shower, blow job, big ass, shower blow job big ass. Same formula each chapter. Needs moving along, needs dialogue and deeper characters, Rachel needs to join in, etc.

Langweilig. Kaum Abwechslung. Unpassenden Titel. Er Wächst nicht. Punkt. Es bleibt klein wie er ist.

Kein Penis Wachstum.

Kein Körper Wachstum.

Kein Wachstum Charakterlich.

Immer Devot. Keine Veränderung

Thema Überschrift, Thema Verfehlt,

F Minus - Setzten.

Freundliche Gute Nachtgeschichte mit Petting, denn DIESE Frau mit den riesigen Titten geht 1000% unbefriedigt irgendwann dem armen Jungen fremd.

Denn sie hatte keinen Orgasmus.

Oh sie hatte, aber kommen sie, bitte….

Einfach nur Unrealistisch.

Gut is deine Story. Lieb, Nett, Freundlich, Keinerlei Intrigen.

Keine Geschichtliche Spannung, keinerlei Höhepunkte.

Great story but a few more chapters would be awesome. But I understand if you don’t have the time.

While rather too short, this seventh chapter is very sweet and very romantic. Wonderful storytelling by the author.