All Comments on 'Will You?'

Nice Job with 1st person. I really liked the fishing trip part more than the sex part.

Out-Fucking-Standing!!!!!!!!!Hilarious. Do it again.

The next chapter should be interesting! Danny holds out hope to all of us

old farts....

Danny. I know you have had another story or two with Deb in them, and you have me believing that both of you are for real! I was two months short of my 58th birthday when my first wife died, and eleven months and two days later, I was married to the woman who followed my first wife in that job (We were all in the same workplace.) Boy, does your Deb ever bring back memories of my #2 (She died of a different form of cancer than #1.) Thanks for rebooting the memories!

Lord that was funny!

humor and satire would have been great but I probably wouldn't have read it....To a 68 y.o. from a 67 y.o. you bring back a lot of memories.. Not only sex but location (coastal CA and Reno..think Big Sur, Pismo and Tahoe) and TJ instead of the Far East..Great.. Funny... and real. That makes it good. I'm on the other coast now but if Deb had a sister I'd have enjoyed meeting her..............lol..Thanks.

...how come you didn't tell rach about extenz?! thanks for the entertainment...

Rambling it may be , but it is an excellent story.

That story has to be one of the most rib-tickling pieces that I've read in aeons.

I put faces to all the characters with prompting from a great wordsmith !

I reakon it would qualify as a good script to be delivered by a great stand-up the likes of "the big yin" ( Billy Connely)

Well done from a 60 + Brit

This guy can make me actually see what he is wrting about. Funny as hell and sexy too

A few more stories like this and this story site will sure improve. Funny and sexy at the same time.

The ending was perfect and he bit the hook and Marie reeled him in -

Of course Deb set him up for it without even thinking it through - let's hope her sense of humor has rather extreme limits -

This one is a little gem.

Geez. It sounds like MGM could set up clinic of his own. Good Read of Walking the tightrope between tutorial & depraved.

Some people seem to be funny without trying.

Others are not funny no matter how they try.

magmaman is the former.

Funnier yet. I found this in someone's Favorites.

Whose?

magmaman's!

Yeah, that's right.

magmaman promoting his own story in his own Favorites.

Braggart.

But, hell, he was right --.and it got me to read it.

So,

Thanks for the story.

And, thanks for listing it in your Favorites.

Paul in Oklahoma

and his less than a minute sex drive with wife Peggy, TK U MLJ LV NV

Funny as all get out. Had to stifle my laughter so I didn’t wake up She Who Must Be Obeyed. Easy 5 stars, even without much smut.