All Comments on 'Will You Be Mine?'

by LucyAnneThorn

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Will527Will527about 1 year ago

I generally don't care for stories involving pain for the woman, but this was written so well I found it incredibly erotic. Very nice work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Well, a very unique beginning to, hopefully, will be long set of hot erotic chapters as Billie is brought out of her shell. Yes, Rose help set Billie up and now Billie will be abused, humiliated, and degredated so that she suffers exquisitely at the hands of Rose, Lizbeth, and William. So many options and hope that the author brings them to life.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Love it pls carry on

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

No safe words, no consent, no honesty. I would kill William right now if I could, and Rose too.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Yes pls more, want to see what happens to her.

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I'm just a middle aged, oversexed gal with a wild imagination, using this place to flirt with fantasies that are too dangerous, too crude or too forbidden to happen for real. I'm an avid reader and connoisseur of stories that toe the edges. I love characters who struggle again...