by LittlestSissy
Interesting, waiting to see how it goes from here. This can be a start to a good exercise or a very bad dilemma.
Still an amazing story and one I very much look forward to. The only downside was the lack of any serious sexy times. Maybe it would have been better to include the loanshark meeting into this ep and have some fun after it.
But I guess that will be the next episode, looking forward to it ;)
So hot! I can’t wait to read more, I really want to see how he enjoys being taken by Barry!
Good story telling. It would benefit from third person narration, so as to know more about Barry's motives and other's reactions and thoughts. One important detail that can be incorporated later. If our hero is trying to fix his life and even act correctly, it is obvious he can very simply pick a time to call or visit his parents and actually let them in as to why he is doing what he is doing. They are his parents, after all and it does not make sense that he would mislead them like that.
I am so loving this story... Needs a little more motivation, and information from Barry, but otherwise very erotic and sexy... muah...