All Comments on 'Wilmington Woman's Club Ch. 62'

by Paris Waterman

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LarryInSeattleLarryInSeattlealmost 13 years ago
Probably

the best orgy stroke story i've ever read. I loved it.

LarryInSeattleLarryInSeattleover 11 years ago
Great voyeur story.

One thing, though. The ladies are in cocktale dresses and Gerry is wearing jeans?

ParisWatermanParisWatermanover 11 years ago
Regarding Gerry and his jeans.

Perhaps I erred there... and perhaps, because Gerry is utra rich, it doesn't matter to him or others what he wears. Were I to redo the scene I'd use trousers, or slacks. But it's finished. What I don't understand was all the clammering that I end the story - that it was too long. And bowing to my readers, I ended it abruptly, without the final scenes resolving the various plot and subplots in a tale that was at least four stories wrapped into one. I won't do it again. PW

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