All Comments on 'Wilson Peak Pt. 03'

Wish you would give us more than one page at a time. The suspense is killing me!

I agree with a previous comment. The chapters are only one page. I believe a few more pages at a time would be better. It may take longer to post but it may give he reader an idea of the direction the story is going. Its just a thought but i am only stating my preference.

A story with a bit of mystery, compelling characters and a threat from the elements. A fun read. Looking forward to more.

And it will turn to ice?

Yeah, if you want to save her from hypothermia it would probably be worth it to burn the propane since you didnt start the engine to run the heater.

This one page at a time crap is tedious.

"Do you always have to go to this much trouble to get a date?" she asked as I sat across from her."

This felt out of place and character. A momentum speed bump in an otherwise smooth ride.

Curious where you are taking this story as it winds around with the other narrative.