All Comments on 'Winding Creek'

by JDDebaum

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Excellent story, would like to see this continued.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Share the plot vision more, I think you have a good story going but reveal more where you are headed with easier, smoother, more engaging words. I am interested in seeing how you develop this story.

sdoc9612sdoc9612over 1 year ago

Great story. Please keep this one going.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Ditto what Anonymous #2 said.

Freddog6601Freddog6601over 1 year ago

Good story that could use some polish.

This has the possibility of a continuation story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Like reading the westerners of the 50's. Must use your imagination to see it. Would like a sequel. Made me feel young again.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Think you could continue this into

really goodtale.

RasmatRasmatover 1 year ago

In my mind, I was seein' hit in black n' white. I'd be right proud to see a passle more episodes just as soon as ya kin git'em writ.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Both Winding Creek and Willow Creek in the story. Is that an error or are there two places with similar names?

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