All Comments on 'Window Dressing'

by TWeston

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bottovarnisbottovarnisover 2 years ago

excellent and pretty arousing . The pacing and tease was terrific. Nice work! Thank you.

DivindisguiseDivindisguiseabout 2 hours ago

Amazing story. It has a good build-up and finish. I'm surprised there aren't more comments here.

I especially loved the line ' When she spoke, her voice was almost a sweet purr. "Why don't the two of you finish undressing me?" '

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Writer and editor of more than a hundred articles, short stories, and books. I love writing, and I write for me. I love to create fictional stories, putting people into circumstances I wish were mine. And I love to edit stories for other writers.