All Comments on 'Windows Bk. 02 Ch. 04'

by SylviaG

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JBEdwardsJBEdwardsabout 1 year ago

This is a brilliant story, Sylvie. It's one of your best. You have mastered portraying the humiliation kink. I enjoyed the silent scorn (and not-so-silent scorn) of Sylvie's friends and neighbors. I loved her subtle tease of the neighbor, as well. Her new hubby, Mr. Ron Smith, is a weird egg, isn't he. Sylvie seems to have real strength of character to be able to endure it all, and to cope as well as she's been doing. Also, I hope you are going to give us -- at some point -- a description of the godawful painting in the sitting room! Thank you for another great chapter. I love this series. Five stars again, JB

LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggabout 1 year ago
POV turns on a dime at dizzying rate

If this is what the author intended. It's working. Quality writing.overall.

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