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As Melissa finished, Vivienne raised a soft voice (to keep from waking anyone else for the walls in the servant's quarter were quite thin) to ask a question that had passed through her mind many nights before. "Melissa? If you hate the way Bliss treats your tits, why do you spend so long making them look so good?"
"Because if I don't, she might stop."
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At some point I may revisit this, but for now this is it. There are many more stories to do with the Starshadow house and the servants, and as you might have noticed if you're following my stuff, it's all part of the same 'universe'.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoI feel your writing is probably pretty good, but I suggest much smaller paragraphs and more dialogue. Huge, unbroken paragraphs can be a deterrent to many readers. Personally, I lost interest. Also, I can't help thinking your story should be in the "Fantasy/Sci-Fi" section.
