All Comments on 'Winter Mix Ch. 02: Shoveler'

Please give us chapter 3 soon...

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You also did a great job of mentioning the name brands popular for that time period...

Boring. It also doesn't belong I this category.

Working on it for you. MP2 :-)

Verisimilitude is important to me. I appreciate that you appreciate my scene setting. MP2 :-)

This is Lit Erotica, not just a ‘fuck story’ (though it is that, also.). I wish it didn’t bore you, but I get that different readers bring different expectations to the experience. Thank you for your honest opinion. As for category, I respectfully disagree. This tale, like my entire oeuvre, is fully centered on Incestuous and Taboo sexual and interpersonal relationships. MP2 :-)

Great tempo and timing. Love the timeline and the description of your everyday items. Feel I’m back in that era. - Vriesea

I strive for re-creating the times. Glad you find it so, too! MP2 :-)